Inspiring words and simple way of expressing the feelings of someone who’s truly in-love.

Image by Frankie Roberto via Flickr

I care for you not because I am

expecting something in return

But I naturally feel it and it’s my

simplest way of letting you know

how much you really mean to me

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I like you not because of lust

but I want our love to last and

making love with you is the

ultimate way of making you feel

how much I really love you

*

I love you just like how

the ocean relies on rivers

so that it won’t run dry
I need you just like how

my computer needs anti-virus

to be functional and useful

I care for you just like how

the ozone layer protects us

from harmful radiation

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I love you not because I need you

But I need you because I love you

As the plant needs water to be

productive, attractive and pretty

*

I miss you not because I want you

But I want you because I love you

As the Earth needs sunlight

In order to sustain life

*

Wrap me with your arms

I am weak without you

Feed me with much love

and I’ll be forever strong

Leave me never my dear

Because my heart will die

a hundred thousand times

the moment that you do.

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Comments (22)
  • Unofre Pili on Aug 29, 2009

    Creative and innovative lines bro. Nice piece.

  • Joie Schmidt on Aug 29, 2009

    The picture is adorable and the poem endearing*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • monica55 on Aug 30, 2009

    What a powerful, endearing love.The beloved is so very blessed.
    Monica.

  • Goodselfme on Aug 30, 2009

    Splendid meaningful prose filled with love messages. I can read the wishfulness as if it is coming out from your words as I take them in.TX So well done, my friend.

  • rutherfranc on Aug 30, 2009

    very passionate and very clever laying your emotions along with love for nature…

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 30, 2009

    Another very romantic and passionate piece. Beautiful.

    Christine

  • cutedrishti8 on Aug 30, 2009

    Very romantic …. very nice to see this one…

  • Kairos on Aug 30, 2009

    I remember Elizabeth Browning’s How Do I Love Thee.

  • Debra. on Aug 30, 2009

    A lovely romantic piece.

  • Lex92 on Aug 30, 2009

    what a beautiful poem :)

  • lindalulu on Aug 30, 2009

    Wonderful !!! ;)

  • Juancav on Aug 30, 2009

    A romantic and modern poem.

  • Eunice Tan on Aug 30, 2009

    Great ways and manner to love somebody!

  • Radhika Bhargava on Aug 30, 2009

    Its very romantic and passionate with great feeling….

  • Yovita Siswati on Aug 31, 2009

    very sweet and romantic! beautiful expression on how you love somebody. great work!

  • xoxo on Sep 1, 2009

    Words of someone really in love :)

  • Jane Jane on Sep 1, 2009

    answeet..=)

  • Vikram Chhabra on Sep 2, 2009

    Very beautifully expressed!

  • Melody SJAL on Sep 2, 2009

    Very poignant and intense.

  • Mr Ghaz on Sep 6, 2009

    Another excellent and very attractive poem as always! I LIKED IT!..thanks you so much for sharing this nice and superb stuff.

  • zoila on Sep 10, 2009

    You\’ve been so sweet, nice to know that. keep it up…

  • Sashya on Oct 9, 2009

    Nice Poem. You seem to be the romantic type. Keep expressing your emotions while writing.

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