Comments on: Why He Beat Me So Bad

By: Lauren Axelrod

Lauren Axelrod — Fri, 09 Jan 2009 01:49:14 +0000

wow. That’s all I can say for this one.

By: Virginia Morgan

Virginia Morgan — Thu, 08 Jan 2009 19:38:29 +0000

wow. very powerful. gonna stumble this one! very emotional

By: eddiego65

eddiego65 — Thu, 08 Jan 2009 12:10:55 +0000

Sad but powerful poem! Good you got out!

By: blue rose

blue rose — Wed, 07 Jan 2009 22:29:45 +0000

THAT WAS A HEART FELT POEM.I HAVE BEEN AROUND THAT ,YES I HAVE 7 SISTERS AND 2 BROTHERS I LOVE THEM .IM GLAD THEY GOT OUT
THANK YOU FOR SHARING THAT.

By: Chris Stonecipher

Chris Stonecipher — Wed, 07 Jan 2009 21:40:27 +0000

I don’t know what to say accept that my prayers go out for you.

By: William L Domme

William L Domme — Mon, 05 Jan 2009 12:05:29 +0000

This is strong. Writing's very controlled.
really like this part;

"Make sure his dishes washed
floors mopped windows cleaned
Don't need that look from him
It's ugly so mean
Won't raise my voice put my hands on my hip
Oh no honey you about to get one to the lip
He calls my name with so much anger and hate
In the back of my mind I'm sad I even went on that date
Your man comes home you glad I'm sad
STILL CAN'T FIGURE OUT WHY HE BEAT ME SO BAD"

By: Darla Smith

Darla Smith — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 22:24:55 +0000

This is very heartfelt and saddening.

By: Jasin

Jasin — Mon, 29 Dec 2008 16:03:47 +0000

Sad and powerful, nice job.