Why The Sky Treats Us Differently

wonder on Sep 30, 2011

Tags: apple, children, clouds, drought, floods, magic, Rain, roof, sky, sun, Things, vault

A poem asking why it is not the same everywhere when we are all under the singular sky.

Housed under one roof

we’re the children of the sky

yet you’re biased, I say you are

I question myself why?

When it pours somewhere

somewhere its sunny bright

waves leap and bound in floods

drowning lands out of sight.

Some regions the apple of your eye

bounties in abundance

and there it crackles in drought dismal

the riddles of providence.

Now do not recite nature’s laws

theories have lost logic

for you know they’re all preordained

all your black magic.

Or why should culprits go scot free?

Weaklings penalized?

Why are things unfair everywhere,

that cannot be verbalized?

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girishpuri on Sep 30, 2011
wonderful , biased sky , good imagination
DHEERUMT on Sep 30, 2011
very cool and awesome
Dreamy777 on Sep 30, 2011
awesome article
erwinkennythomas on Sep 30, 2011
nice imagination!
Rosettaartist1 on Sep 30, 2011
good one
Starpisces on Sep 30, 2011
very creative one.. well composed.
I also find the sky treats us differently, staying near the equator, everyday is so hot and humid.
The Silver Phoenix on Sep 30, 2011
so true and beautifully put. enjoyed this poem very much indeed.
Suni51 on Sep 30, 2011
This is natural, wonder. Even mom treats her kids differently.
AshleyApathy on Sep 30, 2011
creative
Robb714 on Sep 30, 2011
Thank you for the inspiration for my next article. I was stuck without direction and now I have it. Since the fall of man, evil has lead us to believe the sky is partial to one over another. This will soon change and then everyone will see the sky is the same towards you and me. Very eye opening poem even if not entirely on point. It begs to question.
Eunice Tan on Sep 30, 2011
Tough question.
SharifaMcFarlane on Sep 30, 2011
We don’t know. Maybe one day we’ll have the answers.
Martin Kloess on Oct 1, 2011
very good.
Ruby Hawk on Oct 1, 2011
I wonder why every day when I see all the unfairness in the world.
FX777222999 on Oct 2, 2011
Cool and interesting.
rgreenfield on Oct 2, 2011
wonder, I feel your pain even if you are thousands of miles away. I hope you are fine with all of nature’s wrath. thanks for sharing your feelings.
binyumanyun on Oct 5, 2011
Nice Share..
Tulan on Oct 5, 2011
Impressive words.
MountainGirl on Oct 5, 2011
I wonder the same thing.

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