About the things that make up a birthday celebration.

Celebrate the annual party delusion
Commonly called a birthday fusion
This is will be the only time
Where you can truly rule your world
Where you can truly rock your world
Where you can truly love your world

Feel the loving heat
Choose your own poison
Feel the dance beat
Do anything that takes your fancy
Feel the wicked sweet
Without any argument or friction
Have fun and feel the love and joy

Celebrate the love
Celebrate the power
This could be your finest hour
Where you can truly rock your world
Where you can truly love your world
Where you can truly rule your world.

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  • Loretta Johnson on Jul 9, 2007

    I thought this was really good.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 10, 2007

    Birthday celebrations are my favorites.

  • lizzie2uk on Jul 11, 2007

    Excellent, the older we get, the better we can party! We lose the fear of not looking cool, or making fools of ourselves…well, at least I do!

  • shaun ashcroft on Jul 11, 2007

    I think I could set that to music and sing it. Well done

  • Jessica Fike on Jul 13, 2007

    That was such fun to read, and made me want to celebrate my birthday again!

  • Meri Jeffrey on Jul 17, 2007

    Hey Lucy, I want to let you know I’m checking on you! Thanks for thinking of me and I hope everyone is doing very well among the influx of more great content writers! I do mean more! Take good care of yourself and keep up the great content! I will respond to your specific comments later if necessary! My love to all of you!

  • C A Johnson on Jul 18, 2007

    I really liked your poem. Great job!

  • Gail Nobles on Jul 21, 2007

    Great poem and I really love the title.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Jul 22, 2007

    This was fun, just the way a birthday celebration should be. My birthday isn’t until March and at my age that’s where I want it to be…a log time from now. However, when it does come round and they always do, I am going to remember your words and Rock, love, and rule my world.

    I am printing this one.

  • Michelle~Parker on Jul 23, 2007

    Thank-you hon for the welcome back! I haven’t written anything since my new treatment as I don’t have the energy though I have noticed the article you left the comment on was one I written last year but Triond placed on another site. But at least I am back at the computer again even if for only a few moments and boy did I pick the write poem to read!!!!!! I love the words where you can truly rock your world
    where you can truly love your world
    where you can truly rule your world
    the most. It is such powerful, profound words. This is a statement you could use to live your life. Man I want a birthday just like this one!
    Much love and hugssssssssss to you my internet friend.

  • Lucy Lockett on Jul 23, 2007

    Hooray, I am so glad that you are feeling well enough to say hello. I missed you very much!!!I sent out prayers and now they have been answered.Does that mean that the treatment is working?
    Will we be clicking on your work soon? Not pushing or harassing you or anything? Haha, don’t do anything until you can handle it!Thinking of you and sending healing prayers!
    Love & light
    Lucyxxxxoooooosssss

  • Nick Kenney on Sep 10, 2007

    I LOVE your words! They dance on the page!
    And thanks so much for your kind comments to mine…
    Sincerely,

    Nick Kenney

  • Liane Schmidt on Dec 21, 2007

    Best wishes to you on your birthday. Keep up the nice work.

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

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