Wide Awake

Darla Cooke on Jan 23, 2010

Tags: Bed, breathless, Dizzy, excitement, fingertips, flesh, love, love spell, naked, romance, touch, wide awake

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Love poem.

Image by anoldent via Flickr

I’m laying in my huge bed wide awake,

longing to have you by my side.

My body tingles with urgent need,

your gentle touch is what I’m craving.

I want to feel your cool fingertips,

tenderly stroking my naked flesh.

You leave me dizzy and breathless,

helpless to escape your love spell.

I can’t wait until we’re together again,

for you bring excitement into my life.

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Comments (14)

cardy on Jan 23, 2010
Lovely work from you enjoyed the read
ken bultman on Jan 23, 2010
Anticipation.
Guy Hogan on Jan 23, 2010
The waiting is the difficult part; but then it’s worth it.
Michael Eboh on Jan 23, 2010
I have this to share with my lovely girl. Thanks for the share.
johnnydod on Jan 23, 2010
nice poem
Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 23, 2010
Beautiful work Darla and the image you selected was perfect for this write. Thank You so much for sharing yourself and your gift of writing with us all…

Mickey Pig Knuckles
T. S. Lewis on Jan 23, 2010
I hope his touch returns soon
petercurtis97 on Jan 23, 2010
lovely poem hope you find what you are looking for
deep blue on Jan 23, 2010
A poem with some warmth to think about.
giftarist on Jan 24, 2010
Longing.
albert1jemi on Jan 24, 2010
great work
XXElleXX on Jan 24, 2010
Oooo…lusty, loving thoughts and tremulous desire ~ loved this piece Darla
Olivia Van Logum on Jan 24, 2010
Saucy poem – love it!
STEVE666 on Jan 25, 2010
Wow! You have a huge bed?

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