An affair to remember…

Heart that glitters
When he held her  close;
Eyes that smiling
When he sealed her kiss;
Touch that lingers,
Down the bottom of her heels.
Every touch made her moan,
Every gaze made her swoon;
Every tickle awakens her sensation,
and send her mind to a wild abandon.
White sheets, wrinkled blanket
Night sweat, sweet surrender;
Two bodies, one memorable night,
Bring their soul to an oblivion of delight.

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  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 15, 2009

    A passionate and romantic poem. Beautifully written.

    Christine

  • brianberu on Apr 15, 2009

    ahh sweet memories of my past youth, nice poem.

  • Honesty on Apr 15, 2009

    Wow! I bet she’s tickle all over! Wonderfully written! If you want to please post a comment on (Uncertainty)on my site!

  • F J McCarthy on Apr 15, 2009

    Great poem Mys,Passionate,sensual,while still having a sweet romance to it. I enjoyed this very much.

  • Michael Eboh on Apr 15, 2009

    Nice. Well put. Thanks!

  • BC Doan on Apr 15, 2009

    Very sensual…

  • Fegger on Apr 15, 2009

    I got sweaty reading it! Very nice, Mys.

  • Dee Gold on Apr 15, 2009

    passionate

  • kate smedley on Apr 15, 2009

    Those nights are the best! Passionate poem.

  • Darla Smith on Apr 15, 2009

    Very sensual and passionate.

  • Milton H Peebles III on Apr 15, 2009

    Very Entangling!!!!! 5 StarS!!!!!

  • Orbit1973 on Apr 15, 2009

    It is a good poem, with simplicity to comprehend and briefness. Please post more such poems (giggle). I would appreciate to read if you have a comment in my poem too.

  • Judy T Lloyd on Apr 15, 2009

    Nice sensual poem

  • Annie Hintsala on Apr 15, 2009

    Good poem!

  • PR Mace on Apr 15, 2009

    Sweet lovemaking in the light and dark. A touch of passion to my heart. A breathtaking poem.

  • magicdarts on Apr 15, 2009

    brilliant, smouldering stuff!

  • CutestPrincess on Apr 23, 2009

    wow… i love the passion of this one…

  • JK Kristie on Apr 27, 2009

    whoa! it’s getting hot in here…

  • Nicholas Kenney on Apr 28, 2009

    WHOA! Makes me feel like a peeping Tom!
    Great job Mys!

  • spiritwalker on May 15, 2009

    ooooh sexy

  • The Cinders on Jul 31, 2009

    It’s really builds the intensity until the final climax. I like it.
    Keep Writing,
    _Bria

  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Sep 11, 2009

    So passionate and beautiful.

  • Sound and Lights on Oct 26, 2009

    Nice one…

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