Love can be unbelievable at times, the feelings of is it really true, come to mind from time to time.

Will you hold my hand.
Will you keep me safe,
will you keep me warm,
with you’re embrace.
Will you let me taste,
you’re love.
Will you show you’re,
love to me.
Will you be honest,
and true.
Will you pick me up,
if I fall.
Will you listen when,
I call.
Will you believe in me,
like I believe in you.
Will you do all these things,
that I ask of you?
Can you do all these things,
that I ask of you?
I know you can,
I know you will.
I do believe in you.
I like to be reassured,
love can be unbelievable,
at times.
I know all this when you,
said you’re lines,
and the words I do.
This is all because,
I love you to.

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Comments (12)
  • M A Bhanpurwala on Feb 21, 2009

    Nice thoughts about relationships.

  • Blade619 on Feb 21, 2009

    /agrees with ^

  • Darla Smith on Feb 21, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • Nadir on Feb 21, 2009

    Lovely indeed…. Eutopia?

  • Peter Cimino on Feb 21, 2009

    Awwww…..very touching and filled with emotion. Very nice.

  • Bren Parks on Feb 21, 2009

    Sigh…………

  • Lee Altman on Feb 21, 2009

    touching poem

  • rutherfranc on Feb 21, 2009

    doubts and reassurance.. beautiful cardy..

  • miraj on Feb 22, 2009

    Hi,

    Love is and should be always filled with hope.Thanks for sharing this.

    my deepest respect and gratitude,cardy
    LOVE IS ALL

    Walk in beauty change the world.

  • F J McCarthy on Feb 22, 2009

    Very nice Cardy, Its nice to hear your love actually say
    ” I love you”, even though you know they do.

  • George W Whitehead on Feb 22, 2009

    Lovely.

  • Peter Cimino on Feb 26, 2009

    Awesome! Lovely, heartfelt and very sweet!

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