Will You Friend

LOVELYHONEY on Nov 3, 2009

An extraordinary poet who has agreat grasp of the English language writes …

Will you friend

I wish I could write poetry

Like you so beautifully do

Will you some day teach me?

Or else oust me

That decision I leave it you

PAR EXCELLENCEEY!!!!!

But I too am hungry

No not for food,

But food for my mind

Of recognition

Of hunger for happiness

Of hunger for friends welfare

For hunger of being

Of some service to mankind

Will you help me wipe out?

Such extraordinary hunger

I really only wonder

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Comments (12)

Darla Cooke on Nov 3, 2009
Wonderful poem!
A.L.Smith on Nov 3, 2009
Very nice!
ashan1614 on Nov 3, 2009
Just keep striving to write poetry that feeds your soul as well as the souls of others. I think this happens when we write from the heart.
Lady Sunshine on Nov 3, 2009
Lovely, LH. We should all strive for such excellence. And that hunger helps us write from the heart.
cebuanaeyez on Nov 3, 2009
You do write poetry so beautifully!
petercurtis97 on Nov 3, 2009
lovely write L.H lovely images and searching words
lindalulu on Nov 3, 2009
Lovely Honey…
CA Johnson on Nov 3, 2009
I really liked your poem. You did a great job with it.
Teves on Nov 3, 2009
Hi Lovely Honey I’m here…nice poem.
neet on Nov 4, 2009
Beautiful again.
svishnugopal on Nov 4, 2009
touched my heart, wonderful
The Last Ogre on Nov 4, 2009
Nice poem.

Hi there!