Willow Dance

jake marcob on Apr 4, 2008

Tags: Life, swaying, willows

Life may seem to blow and sway, just try to make it like a beautiful day.

trees blowing in the distance
swaying willow trees
freely waving in the breeze
never defending itself from turbulence
just the occassional breaking of a limb
its trunk flexible and trim
seems to be in a deep trance
leaning and tipping back and forth
the powerful wind as its engery source
making the willows seem to dance

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Liane Schmidt on Apr 5, 2008
Beautiful poem Jake.*

Best wishes.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Tarra B. on Apr 5, 2008
excellent poem, beautifully written!
KathySpring on Apr 6, 2008
I think you found you niche in writing Jake
Good Luck
KathySpring
Bill M. Tracer on Apr 7, 2008
Well done, Jake.

Take Care,

Bill
IcyCucky on Apr 7, 2008
Beautiful poem, Jake..
K.Abdelilah on Apr 7, 2008
I like your poem
Sotiris on Apr 23, 2008
Very nice! I liked it! Keep up the good work!
daryush on Apr 23, 2008
Wow, that’s really nice!
Nike Phoenix on Apr 30, 2008
Very good, Jake

You are a very good writer Jake

Keep up the good work!
M.C. Johnson on May 7, 2008
Wow. You have a powerful way with words! I’m moved.
M.C. Johnson on Sep 16, 2008
Revisiting. I love your images. They really make the poem come alive! You have a real gift.
ML Sheldon on Mar 6, 2009
That was a beautiful poem. I love willows!
Jake Madden on Jan 1, 2010
The way you use your words, it really put an image in my head.
ShadowPsychos on May 21, 2010
great poem
Tiki33 on Apr 3, 2012
This is such a lovely poem. Thanks!

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