A back to school haiku.
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Summer’s winding down.
Autumn breezes will abound.
School buses make rounds.
Beautiful haiku and may I add, a PERFECT haiku in terms of how technical it is and how it follows the rules of writing a haiku (i.e. syllables, contrast on the last line etc.) Hate to get reminded though that I’ve got school coming up soon…grr…
But, beautiful and perfect!
A back to school goodie.
Thanks my friends for your support. Sorry about the broken sentences I will submit a fix.
Summer goes and comes like it should. Right on schedule. Like it!
Haiku’s have been having broken sentences lately, which doesn’t do their structure any good at all; since it depends a lot on appearance. No fault of yours, however; and that’s exactly what is going on for me right now. Beautiful poem, and perfect choice of picture.
The computer will be mine from 9 to 4! Yeah!
A very good haiku. Every mother should read this. Does it say LaidLaw on the school bus? Is that a county or town? I’ll send you a message soon.
A wonderful haiku, but you are depressing me talking about the end of summer lol. Well done.
A very interesting read. well done and thanks a lot for sharing this great stuff.
Oh, I hate to see the end of summer. My granddaughter’s been back in school two weeks now.
Lovely haiku from you as always Pam, I can’t believe the summer holidays are nearly over!
Good to see a Haiku Poem here. Good write on a difficult form.
But I believe your poem sounds bit rhythmic where Haiku shouldn’t be rhymed.
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