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obikelvin on Aug 15, 2010
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Window.

Window

Winter chill

Moisture laden view

Lips pressed against

My breath fogs

I look

Grey eyes

Searching

For you

Bleakness stares back

My vision fades

As icicles

Formed from tears

Freezes my soul.

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Comments (9)
  • gaby7 on Aug 15, 2010

    A poignant piece here!

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 15, 2010

    lovely,

  • LoveDoctor on Aug 15, 2010

    Amazing poetry.

  • webseowriters on Aug 15, 2010

    Very nice, thanks for sharing

  • Will Gray on Aug 15, 2010

    Wonderful poem! Great work!

  • LCM Linda on Aug 15, 2010

    Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • Inna Tysoe on Aug 15, 2010

    Thanks for that.

  • GodsGrace on Aug 16, 2010

    Impressive

  • papaleng on Aug 16, 2010

    a very nice one.

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