Havoc
on a
Windy Day.

It

was

A

Windy Windy

Day

Even

So

A

person

cried

out

Motor

Mouth…

Motor

mouth…

your

Chops

go

a-flapping.

yakkety-yak.

Prittle-prattle.

loose lips.

All jaw

and gabby.

On

this

Windy windy

Day.

Trying to keep your hair at bay winds a rushing

Skirt a-flying

Cell a-calling, every one a-talking.

Havoc on a windy day.

..Image credit

                       ♥♥♥Standingproud♥♥♥

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  • johnnydod on Mar 9, 2010

    what a laugh Donna this is a lovely poem, and as for the picture so so funny.
    another classic from the new world.

  • ganeshgolha on Mar 9, 2010

    Good one

  • wonder on Mar 9, 2010

    How do you wear lipstick? This piece is beyond comment.

  • AlmaG on Mar 9, 2010

    A very windy piece and gosh what a mouth.. LOL! :D

  • ken bultman on Mar 9, 2010

    Talk to me only with thine eyes…loose lips sink ships. lol.

  • Sharif Ishnin on Mar 9, 2010

    What a nice surprise.. It’s really a flapping.lol

  • Michael Eboh on Mar 9, 2010

    Funny poem Donna.

  • standingproud on Mar 9, 2010

    I cant come here any more.
    I cant stop laughing hahahaha.

  • Poozie on Mar 9, 2010

    Donna Dear Wee One your such a blessing! You have no idea even through your own travels, how much you really have helped me let my lips flap an dribble doddle downaround with the medicine must go down., And Have Strength to stand up an go get my med.s, with my lips flappin in The Wind. Laughing with a grin….Thanks so much For Sharing This With Me Donna Dear. I Love This hahahaha Oh my Goodness It’s A Blasty Blast. Just what one needs when ailed as I am. You to write funny ha ha’s to let us leave it alone an laugh. Even if just for the flappin moment hahaha an I have to say, Lipstick? what lipstick haha not today lol..great shorty Donna Sweets.

  • Moira62 on Mar 9, 2010

    Hahahhahahahhahaahahhahahahahhaha you have just brightened up my day so much…Thank you sweet Donna :)

  • deep blue on Mar 9, 2010

    A real windy day, haven’t seen those mouths misshapen so badly by 100 knot headwinds. You’re amusing, Donna.

  • Hepsi.M on Mar 9, 2010

    It was fun to read this poem.
    Thanks Donna for making us laugh with ur poem & the pic too

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 9, 2010

    I loved that. It great fun read. What a picture!

    Christine

  • Pete Marshall on Mar 9, 2010

    excellent & made even more so by the lips at the end. thanks for the laugh cheers Pete

  • papaleng on Mar 9, 2010

    LOL, You made my day, Donna.. a very nice piece and a good funny photo.

  • diamondpoet on Mar 9, 2010

    That was wild and crazy I loved what you wrote to back-up the picture, Thanks for the laugh.

  • devsir on Mar 9, 2010

    Oh I got surprised. Nice work

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 9, 2010

    Cute poem!

  • Starpisces on Mar 9, 2010

    cute, naughty Donna again, ha ha…

  • ashan1614 on Mar 9, 2010

    I’d love to see that with some folks I know who are always talking!

  • Vikram Chhabra on Mar 9, 2010

    Hahaha!! I laughed a lot on this one!! Really made me feel good!!

    Great picture as well!

  • Brenda Nelson on Mar 9, 2010

    We had a crazy windy day here yesterday too.. yikes.. what a fun poem to read.

  • krrymarie on Mar 9, 2010

    lmao!! :-) you have so made my day I can’y stop laughing,
    just glad I don’t have them lips in your pic though lol!! x

  • Tina Cassello on Mar 9, 2010

    The poem was good. I reminded me that some people say Chicago got it’s nickname not from the wind but the “windy politicians”. I know what you mean about everyone talking on their cell phones, but the photo was really the highlight.

  • Francois Hagnere on Mar 9, 2010

    For a surprise, this is a surprise. A good laugh indeed!

  • phyllis on Mar 9, 2010

    What Fun!!! Thank you for a laugh !!

  • Atanacio on Mar 9, 2010

    a very goof antry and the pic at the end was off the Hook!

  • Silent Wasp on Mar 9, 2010

    hahah thanks for the read :D

  • 8Shei8 on Mar 9, 2010

    Delightful and fun to read. Very creative!

  • giftarist on Mar 9, 2010

    I pity her. lol

  • Lady Sunshine on Mar 9, 2010

    lmao! Donna, that was hilarious! Wee!

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Mar 9, 2010

    that is some powerful wind there.

  • Goodselfme on Mar 9, 2010

    Sometimes a picture is worth a thousand words. This is one of those. With your words, before I saw the pic, I was in another zone.

  • Neva Flores on Mar 9, 2010

    The funniest! Of all time!!!!! (the picture that is)

  • Debra. on Mar 9, 2010

    Creative, witty and down right hilarious! lol

  • Lord Banks on Mar 10, 2010

    Cool I’ve been accused of talking too much or not enough! I wish people would make uo their minds lol, good poem LB

  • zoeyclark on Mar 10, 2010

    Loved the image. And the piece:) Entertaining as hell.

  • kate smedley on Mar 10, 2010

    Donna, you are so unique and a creative genius, this is brilliant, I love the pic!! Keep them coming xx

  • devsir on Mar 10, 2010

    nice pic

  • Shirley Shuler on Mar 10, 2010

    lol, Donna, this was a fun piece, I loved it!

  • albert1jemi on Mar 11, 2010

    nice share

  • Angel AF on Mar 11, 2010

    Hahahaha, you put a smile on my face and made me laugh. You are so much fun…
    Are those your lips?….haha

  • CA Johnson on Mar 11, 2010

    Your poem waas so funny. I certainly did not expect to see the pic at the end of it. That was hilarious.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Mar 11, 2010

    The picture at the end made me laugh even harder Donna.

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