Winter Love

Dark Antirex on Nov 19, 2009

Tags: Life, love, poem, snow, xmas

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A poem about love…

I became confused

As having a look at you

I feel that I was never feeling

Just waited for you to appear

And hear your steps with my ear

Now it’s you, yes, I know

You run to me in the snow.

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Comments (12)

drelayaraja on Nov 19, 2009
Great love. I like it
K.Reshma on Nov 19, 2009
Interesting
Darla Cooke on Nov 19, 2009
Very nice poem.
ceegirl on Nov 19, 2009
nice write
diamondpoet on Nov 19, 2009
Nice poem.
ashan1614 on Nov 19, 2009
I imagine you spotting your love from a distance and the spark of recognition as the gap closed between you.
Frances Lawrence on Nov 19, 2009
I liked the poem, it really catches that sense of being made complete because you know that you love and you are loved.
Tanya Wallace on Nov 19, 2009
Lovely poem with some great imagery in your wording!
dgraphicrookie on Nov 19, 2009
nice way of conveying emotion. short but definitely concise. cheers!
cutedrishti8 on Nov 20, 2009
Lovely work..
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 20, 2009
a lover is ones life u ask me
lovely
Hansika on Nov 21, 2009
lovely…thanks for the share…i liked it!!!!!!!

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