Lovely poem. I’m longing for Spring to get here.

Good poem. I’m like the wood pigeon ready for spring. Well done.

Hey, after 16″ of heavy snow, I’m longing for spring too!
Thanks,
Clay

great poem, soon this will all be passed, and spring will be here at last,

lovely and heartfelt. wish I could experience winter days..

very consice and well written. good job.

good we also experience similar things in Canada

at times though very rarely electricity ditches

otherwise temp are upto minus 33

now its minus 16 plus minu,

another month then .
i have submiited scenes from Canada

at present under revision. pl see tille will be ”HUES OF MONTREAL”

you really do have a way with rhyme and rhythm,that is your forte,though I personally feel winter has its own charm here in my land,India.

my deepest respect and gratitude,revivor
LOVE IS ALL

Walk in beauty change the world.

The poem is successful in describing the gloomy side of winter, which the narrator hates. Another great piece.
Monica

That last verse is the best:

It’s only for fools/To break winter rules/Longing for signs of spring

I love that because it has rhythm and continuity and it suggests the pessimistic moodiness that people feel when they are tired of winter. And it seems so futile to try to break winter’s rules, but the foolish will try.
I really like that.

wonderful

I feel cold now! congratulations

I read this as the early signs of spring sunshine appear, so I am looking out of the window trying to get warm again.

It sure does seem as if Winter Rules; almost our entire life during the snow and cold season; along with flu and cold season.
Well written, and controlled.
Love it.

That a great poem and written so well…

We don\’t have much of a winter in Florida. It\’s hard to imagine having to stay indoors for months at a time. I\’d probably try to break all the winter rules.

No winter in the Philippines too. But with this wonderful write, I can just imagine it. Nice poem.

Great use of images here. Picture perfect!