How I feel every time my husband leaves us for another deployment.

The dreamer withers back
The sky is turning gray
The owl retreats to nest
With nothing left to prey
A fog now settles in
As silence drapes the morn
Your eyes don’t want to open
But remember what you’ve sworn
Another useless moment
Passes by without you
You wonder where he is now
And if man will suffer too
Your child stirs in her bed
A strong wind rushes in
A moment of refreshment
You muster up a grin
Her arms now wrapped around you
A tear streams down your cheek
She clings to all you offer
You know you can’t be weak
For you it won’t be easy
It never seems to be
He’s left them times before this
So why are you so lonely?
The question goes unanswered
She dresses for the day
Where are coat and hat now?
Your mind begins to stray
What if all is taken?
Your head will start to ache
Now pull yourself together
Just for the children’s sake
Time will flow without you
The leaves will fall again
But if you don’t face winter
What will happen then?

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  • Unofre Pili on Sep 6, 2008

    Well-done Josey. This an inspired piece.

  • Alexa Gates on Sep 6, 2008

    that was beautiful!

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 6, 2008

    Beautifu heart felt poetry. I can well imagine what you are going through. Best of luck to you and yours. Ruby

  • Ken on Sep 7, 2008

    Wow

    You always hear people talk about the support for the troops. Having spent my whole adult life in the military, I know what an important role is played by those left behind.

    Your strength is inspiring.

  • loafer on Sep 7, 2008

    i understand the longing, as well as the courage . . . .

  • Anne Lyken-Garner on Sep 7, 2008

    This is really touching. What a wonderful, heart-felt poem.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Sep 7, 2008

    This is a very honest and touching poem.
    You are in my prayers.

    Darlene

  • quiet voice on Sep 8, 2008

    … Hi, Very beautifully written,
    God bless you and yours. Take care.

  • picquet on Sep 8, 2008

    heart rending read that was, abeautiful but sad poem

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Sep 8, 2008

    heartfelt poem, beautifully done

  • Shafi Choudhury on Sep 8, 2008

    good poem i lied it because it made me feel for you!

  • william rodriguez II on Sep 8, 2008

    very beautiful poem

  • Moses Ingram on Sep 10, 2008

    Beautiful poem. I like your writing style.

  • Wordsfrommyheart on Sep 12, 2008

    Very inspirational. I love it, well done.

  • Louise Stone on Oct 16, 2008

    A lovely poem and beautifully written.

  • M.C. Johnson on Nov 11, 2008

    Wow! I love the flow!

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