I like how you weave the same sentence into each verse! Beautiful!

Simply beautifully weaved and well written;I enjoyed this poem as it brought back many memories for me.

It’s beautiful Michele. I love the image!

Winds of change seem to be blowing here, Great poem!

A great poem with beautiful combination of the picture. It gives a tast to the poem.

A nice poem wih good flow. Well done.

Great poem and very well-written.

Great poem indeed!

Another wonderful piece, Michele! A very good read!

Very curious style–and excellent phrasing, most worthy of repetition.

A wonderful poem Michele. Will you give us one also for Spring ?
Thank you my Friend,
François

The form is called pantoum and is a bit complex to weave. The way it works is lines 2 and 4 of stanza 1 must be lines 1 and 3 of stanza 2 and so on for the length of the work until the last stanza which uses lines 3 and 1 of the first stanza as lines 2 and 4 respectively. There can be as many stanzas as you like and the lines may be of any syllable count, but a universal pattern is best.

I wouldn’t have to comment, had triond decided to take poetic license and change my description for me. It sometimes irks me that they feel that must change things in your work. I just had them correct my last sonnet back to proper structure because they changed it.

I’m glad that you all enjoyed it. Thanks for the lovely comments!

-M

What’s up old friend. This was awesome. Thank you!

Very nice Michelle I\’m glad you\’re doing well. Would like to
talk sometime. kendicott@verizon.net

Super poem, Michele; I love it. I’m not familiar with pantoum, thanx for introducing it to me. I see what you mean when you say it’s complex to weave.

I enjoy these poems. They take a little more time and thought but I like the sound.

Your work is brilliant I’ve been reading lots of poetry from great writers such as yourself. I think that’s why I’m improving little by little

agree with the others. This poem is really brilliant!

Great rhymes & rhythms here!

Michelle,
As I read through your poem, I experienced a chill up my spine. Your words are quite descriptive and allows readers to feel the senses and emotions in your poem.
Blessings to you,
Chris Stonecipher

Such a lovely poem.

Magical and Bright…

Beautiful poem. The emphasis on repetition only makes it better and stronger

thanks for sharing this.God bless!

Magnificent piece!!

Lovely poem — the imagery is amazing.

I think I’ve only penned one of these and boy oh boy, let me tell you, it wasn’t easy for me. Excellent write. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
*S* Cynthia