Wish List

raman13 on Mar 6, 2010

Tags: artist, gist, hitlist, twist, wish list

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A poem to express love in a different way.

I have a gist,

I give you my list.

My heart has very huge thirst,

I write your name on my wrist.

You make me an artist,

Beware me from dragon fist.

In our life’s this makes a twist,

I love you; don’t give me a place in your hit list.

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Comments (14)

papaleng on Mar 6, 2010
good poem.
gianne on Mar 6, 2010
Nice..
giftarist on Mar 6, 2010
I like the flow of words here.
yes me on Mar 6, 2010
nice one Raman.
Darla Cooke on Mar 7, 2010
Nice poem.
diamondpoet on Mar 8, 2010
Very nice poem, thanks
sambhafusia on Mar 8, 2010
great write
albert1jemi on Mar 9, 2010
grt post
David De Jesus on Mar 10, 2010
Welcome back Raman. I enjoyed your write. Thanks for sharing.
Mary Patricia Bird on Mar 11, 2010
Nice write.
Sammy B on Mar 14, 2010
Cool. i like it. for whatever reason, it reminds me of a stream.
zamorak123 on Mar 22, 2010
great submit
bardhi on Aug 3, 2010
Surely you are very talented.I wonder what inspires you. Your work is amazing.
deklin42 on Aug 30, 2010
Nice rhymes.

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