A poem about wishing under the stars of the Milky Way galaxy.

I sit alone tonight

Glimmering and shinning 100,000 stars!

I sit alone and that’s not right

With the Milky Way above all the cars!

 

I look at the world and

I wonder what will happen now

I see the land turn to sand

And I asked why and how

Nothing will be the same

With the way things are

Nothing will remain

I sit alone in my car

I look up and watch the skies!

So vast and so far away

If you could see with my eyes!

You would cry and understand what I say

I sit alone thinking of you with regret

I see the stars, they’re so beautiful

I wonder what your feeling, no time spent

They remind me of you, so meaningful

I look at the world tonight

Will the answer come to you- alright!

O darling! Please, hold me tight.

Take my breath away and show me the light!

I sit here

Thinking of you

I shed a tear

Don’t be blue

Eternity will come for us soon

Just look up and see……

By gentle guiding light of the Moon

A ray of love from a 100,000 stars all gleaming and free……

T.S.Garp © Copyright 2009 All Rights Reserved.

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  • Teves on Nov 17, 2009

    Nice post…

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Nov 17, 2009

    beautiful!

  • AlmaG on Nov 17, 2009

    What a lovely poem :) I especially like the words…

    I sit here

    Thinking of you

    I shed a tear

    Don’t be blue

    Eternity will come for us soon

    Just look up and see……

    It’s so sweet and romantic ^_^

  • athena goodlight on Nov 17, 2009

    Amazing imagery with words. Nice picture, too. Wow!

  • Aleena on Nov 17, 2009

    Very pretty and romantic :]

  • wonder on Nov 17, 2009

    Really inspired by the stars and composed, wonderful !

  • William J Felchner on Nov 18, 2009

    You can’t beat a poem with the Milky Way in the “starring” role.

  • svishnugopal on Nov 18, 2009

    lovely poem, i dont know you write poems..very nice

  • K.Reshma on Nov 18, 2009

    Very lovely

  • ashan1614 on Nov 18, 2009

    Nicely done! I can imagine you sitting there alone, while in the other cars parked, there are couples sharing the experience together.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 18, 2009

    Great write..Keep on going..

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 18, 2009

    Aww…so sweet! What a romantic you are!

  • lillyrose on Nov 19, 2009

    beautiful!

  • MamtaJha on Mar 7, 2010

    Such a beautiful and romantic poem.

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