With You

Goodselfme on Nov 7, 2009

Many wonderful things are noticed when in love. Perhaps this describes your love too.

Photo of and by Roberta Baxter. Taken at Lake Mc Donald in Glacier National Park in West Glacier, Montana on 5/00

“With You”

You stop the ache in my yearning heart

Your hand in mine, warms every body part.

Your glance makes all my fears disappear

A word from you calms my every fear.

To dine with you makes me feel like royalty

To sleep with you dons my entire face with glee.

When I awake to hear your mellow tone

Then I know I am again, with you alone.

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Comments (11)

Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Nov 7, 2009
That was so sweet, my friend.
shanthu on Nov 7, 2009
nice one
Annashank on Nov 7, 2009
Its very touching thank you for sharing it ….
Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 7, 2009
very sweet n loving poem.. nice reading…
papaleng on Nov 7, 2009
I like it, That was so sweet.
giftarist on Nov 7, 2009
Great piece, Sweet!
chitragopi on Nov 7, 2009
The joy of togetherness well expressed
Mys Lyke Meeh on Nov 7, 2009
A very sweet and nice composition. The rhyming is good.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 7, 2009
A very l;ovely and romantic piece.

Good work.

Christine
deep blue on Nov 8, 2009
Truly inspiring from someone who has it all. A loving companion to spend the whole life through.
MMV Abad on Nov 13, 2009
Beautiful lines. Thank you.

Hi there!