Without

salaam on Nov 26, 2009

Part of the Pithom series…

Without
I am without
I have escaped
Myself

I picked the lock
Unhinged my soul
And made it…
Across the threshold

I fled the tower
And shed the irons
Waded through the moat
I made it to the trees

And I can hear their call
I can hear them scream

I am accused…

But I am free

I have gone
I am free
I have left
I’m not there
I am here
You won’t find
For I am out
Of my mind

I made it…

I am without
I have escaped
Myself

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LOVELY HONEY on Nov 26, 2009
gr8
TroostAvenue on Nov 26, 2009
This This one I understand and find to be a powerful thought. An
insanity attractive to me, but one from I would want the power to
return at will. That might be mutually exclusive though, less than
a full commitment.
maybii on Nov 26, 2009
Nice find. Well done
aunslaught on Nov 27, 2009
Lol, i read the title and thought.. darn.. a waste of time… haha, u proved me wrong.. well-written, my friend
Liane Schmidt on Nov 27, 2009
Strong work.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 27, 2009
A wonderful sense of freedom comes through this piece. Good work.

Christine

Hi there!