Take your pick.

Women come in many guises its up to you to choose

If you want her wild you will have to accept

The odd deep scratch or bruise

You could pick a hot one, but my friend

Be very very aware

You see you might get badly burnt

And this advice I share

I speak from experience because this is one

Lesson I have sorely learnt

If you play with fire you will, I guarantee get burnt

Why not pick a shy one? You just might be surprised

She might just be a sly one, and pleasing to the eye

To me, I picked a smart one; I like a woman with style

She a woman that can be all of these things

She’s hot and wild; she’s smart and shy,

And she’s very versatile.

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  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Jan 13, 2010

    You are a smart one Johnny! Smart, shy and wild.
    Great poem.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 13, 2010

    Good for you. The versatile ones are the best. A lovely piece.

    Christine

  • johnnydod on Jan 13, 2010

    Tee hee to be honest I love you all lol

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Jan 13, 2010

    I’m with you and Christine. Versatility is the key, variety is the spice of life….. Nice write Johnny.

    Aldrin

  • AlmaG on Jan 13, 2010

    Hope you find a smart one :)

  • ken bultman on Jan 13, 2010

    And colorful, too, I note. Very clever poem, indeed.

  • standingproud on Jan 13, 2010

    Well I just smiled.

    Who would think that a man would come up with such a clever write, looking at woman’s knickers in all….lol.
    im very impressed.

  • Guy Hogan on Jan 13, 2010

    The poem is like the introduction and the photo is the payoff. I like this one. Black for mystery. Red for passion and white for purity. The panties say it all.

  • giftarist on Jan 13, 2010

    Clever.

  • joyhyena29 on Jan 13, 2010

    like it…nice one^^

  • Glynis Smy on Jan 13, 2010

    :)

  • Helios on Jan 13, 2010

    Thanks for sharing man!
    Peace

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 13, 2010

    Nice poem!

  • lillyrose on Jan 13, 2010

    hahaha… versatile just like a pair of panties?… Just trying to guess what the pic had to do with it!! LOL lovely poem x

  • Jane Jane on Jan 13, 2010

    perhaps a good choice.

  • diamondpoet on Jan 13, 2010

    That was very creative and I agree it was clever.

  • papaleng on Jan 13, 2010

    you have shared your clever thoughts. Love it man.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 13, 2010

    great poem

  • albert1jemi on Jan 13, 2010

    nice write

  • landiro on Jan 13, 2010

    Good !! when can we meet and where !! (kidding)
    i want a man just as your woman
    if u find one please send him to me :)

  • albert1jemi on Jan 13, 2010

    excellent one

  • carole (bishy57) on Jan 13, 2010

    nice one….

  • Neva Flores on Jan 13, 2010

    Yes some of us women are the full package……as are some of you men….:) Great write

  • Suzi Que xxx on Jan 13, 2010

    WOW Excellent job Johnny!!! Perfect comparison with the picture…. \”panties an the choice of what color to wear\” one way today or another way tomorrow. Its a woman\’s choice to chose. As it\’s a mans choice to pick them wild growing an hope the aggression is passionate…or pick the quiet, shy an gotta teach them everything as if they have no mind to chose their selves, an the same color panties! This is a great story/advice all at the same time. Thanks for sharing Johnny, wonderful job. Please Keep It Up, I would hope you would never let a \”site\’s opinion\” make your choice, who cares if ya miss-spell we all do. No reason for rejection … ever. good job Johnny, you didn\’t give up an let them win from rejects…not a good enough reason to stop writing. again thanks. Your Great. You have too much ambition to not put down in words with great work that comes across with ease! Not many can do.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 13, 2010

    GR888888 JONNY DAD

    You create aggressivity
    In women folk
    All want to you share
    Ah! In your versatility
    With others compare

    If the divorce rate goes up
    Jonny dad
    You will be responsible
    It’ll be sad
    But you’ll feel happy
    When so many women
    At you get mad.

    Go ahead shed all your inhibitions
    Fire all your ignitions and arouse
    See Jonny Dod your spouse
    Will do more, much more
    Than expect of her
    Ever you do.
    Wall Mart will also be happy
    As they will now sell
    Many more a lively panty

  • Roberta on Jan 13, 2010

    I’ll have all three pairs, thank you, quite like Red for danger.
    Nice one Johnny:-D

  • Phyllis on Jan 13, 2010

    Great sense of humor!!

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 13, 2010

    very Nice…

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Jan 13, 2010

    1)LHwtf?

    2).very creative guy’s response.

  • thuanynguyen on Jan 14, 2010

    Amazing piece! I love it!

  • Val Mills on Jan 14, 2010

    Really enjoyed this. It also feels as if you enjoyed writing it.

  • johnnydod on Jan 14, 2010

    I loved writing it Valmnz

  • hollynoel001 on Jan 15, 2010

    this can be so true why settle for one when you can have an all-in-one!!!! great piece johnny glad to see your still writing!

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