When I first met my wife I didn’t know what to think. This poem opened my eyes as I wrote it about how much I truly loved her.

Here I sit,
Strange with wonder;
Weird it seems,
Every thought torn asunder.

To be creative is to be true,
But I am lost;
Without you.

I cannot think,
I have no feeling;
I want to create a world,
But without my baby it can’t happen.

Inspiration and Guidance,
Is what you gave to me;
And with this I will never forget,
That I love you!

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  • JAKE on Feb 21, 2008

    awsome peom

  • Josey on Mar 1, 2008

    Very sweet. I bet your wife loves it.

  • Nike Phoenix on Mar 5, 2008

    Yes she does, Josey. Thank you very much for your comment. I hope you are having a very good day today.

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