Wonderment

Poetic Enigma on Jul 6, 2009

Tags: Beauty, creation, dark, God, light, love, Nighttime sky, Poetry, Stars, wonderment

A poem about a few wonderful things, hope you enjoy!

Don’t you see
Stars falling free
From way up in the sky
Coming down to you and me
Spinning down,
and down some more
Like waves crash
Against the shore

Don’t you see
The moon shining bright
Lighting up the sky
On this beautiful night
Lighting this world,
That once was so dark
Giving that nighttime sky
A little spark

Don’t you see
All the wonders of the world
Created by a higher power
In a time long ago
At a late and lonely hour
There so we could stare
In it’s wonderment
and share those moments with someone who cares

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poet09 on Jul 6, 2009
This is a powerful poem expressing the wonders of God and His power.The picture that you have used is very beautiful,awesome,I can’t fully describe it but no body can do that but God. Thanks
Christine Ramsay on Jul 6, 2009
What a wonderful description of the beautiful things in the world. We are so lucky to have them. I love the picture you have chosen. it suits the poem so well. Great work.

Christine
Sheila M on Jul 6, 2009
I love what the world has to offer=) Beautiful
jamesII on Jul 6, 2009
Always the Creator careS–Why else will he have done any of it?
ellenhart on Jul 6, 2009
i really loved this poem very nice. I look forward to reading more of your work.
STEVE666 on Jul 6, 2009
Great verses, as always PE
Ruby Hawk on Jul 6, 2009
Our world is a wonderful place and I often wonder how many other worlds we share the universe with and what they are.
Debra. on Jul 6, 2009
Poetic, this is a beautiful piece! You have taken the beautiful things in life and emphasized them in a way that they shine with brilliance! Awesome!
lindalulu on Jul 6, 2009
Awesome write!
Joie Schmidt on Jul 6, 2009
This absolutely lives up to its name…….. a true wonder.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
NRX on Jul 7, 2009
Nice. I love it :*
J L Williams on Jul 7, 2009
Good stuff this, captured the wonder of the piece delightfully…the long trail of praising comments are well earnt, nice one!
Bahama227 on Jul 11, 2009
image is everything. your poem says it all

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