For You who are.

  When you feel you need to pray,
I will kneel beside you, and always stay.
never to go away…
Share with you your prayers,
keep in my thoughts, and dreams.
Walk a step behind you, in your shaddows,
In your footprints, realise what it means.
Join in with the chorus, when you sing,
Lift you up, as I am beneath your wings,
On the pedestal where you stand,
It was me who put you there.
You just needed a hand…..

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  • Themax on Nov 8, 2009

    great write Judi great,Thanks for the share !!!!

  • K.Reshma on Nov 8, 2009

    Very nice poem

  • Linda Lori on Nov 8, 2009

    Nice work!

  • Aiyanna on Nov 8, 2009

    Really touching!!!! Just the words I needed this morning!!!! :)

  • Sourav on Nov 8, 2009

    Lovely!

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 8, 2009

    I like it.

  • Teves on Nov 8, 2009

    Great post…

  • Hansika on Nov 9, 2009

    very nice article

  • Ricky Taylor on Nov 9, 2009

    Hi Judi,
    That’s was beautiful. Loved it. ~Ricky

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 9, 2009

    I was thinking you Plymouth women really know how to treat a man’s ego –till you too credit in the last two lines. You English girs aren’t so dumb are you? Nice write.

  • svishnugopal on Nov 9, 2009

    every man needs that hand that u’ve mentioned and if he gets it at teh right time, then no stopping in life…this is a very touching write..

  • xoxo on Nov 10, 2009

    Beautifully written. Thank you :)

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 10, 2009

    lovely poem

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 10, 2009

    very sweet,

  • Mervin on Nov 11, 2009

    I’m inspired by you delicate style.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 12, 2009

    Worthy reading your poem.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 12, 2009

    people use my name to describe how lovely ur work is

    so why cant i say honey

    its just LOVELY

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 12, 2009

    Another I like,

  • Kristina Angel on Nov 12, 2009

    LOve it :0

    http://www.broadonline.co.nr

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 14, 2009

    lovely poem. Lift you up as I am beneath your wings. excellent imagery.

  • Rinks Desai on Nov 19, 2009

    great poem

  • stryka66 on Nov 29, 2009

    enjoyed reading this – thank you

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