A short wishing poem.

Tickle my fancy come play with me
Hug me squeeze me come sit on my knee
Make me tingle lets have a fling
Stir my emotions, make me Zing
Kiss my neck and whisper softly
The things you want, to do with me
Take me to Rome

Wine and dine me

And then take me home
Wrap me in lace and Broderie Anglaise
Bath me in milk and polyurethane foam
Fly me to Rio lets dance in the streets
Make love to me Beneath silken black sheets
Tell me you love me in French and Italian
Call me a Puppy-dog and then a white stallion
So tickle me baby lets have a fling

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  • standingproud on Mar 16, 2010

    flinging and tickling on the streets
    under the sheets.
    Feather me do, feather me not this fluff you write
    will set a flame alight.

  • Moira62 on Mar 16, 2010

    Lovely and lighthearted….i’m sure she’s tickled pink :)

  • Neva Flores on Mar 16, 2010

    It is hot in here! Wonderful!

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 16, 2010

    Very sensual.

  • cardy on Mar 16, 2010

    Wow I enjoyed the read loved the title to great stuff.

  • Jan on Mar 16, 2010

    Can start a fire of Desire…

  • Judi Eddy on Mar 16, 2010

    Wow, best go and have a cold shower now. judi

  • Atanacio on Mar 16, 2010

    Great entry and the pic just added the extra needed push

  • Phyllis on Mar 16, 2010

    WOWWOWWOW!!!!!! HOTHOTHOT !! Love this–

  • LoveDoctor on Mar 16, 2010

    This is one of your best poems. The imagery is great. Nice image too. I agree with frank. lol keep up the good work.

  • krrymarie on Mar 16, 2010

    woohoo!! a greta poem and sooooo hhhoooottttt!!!! lol!!!

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 16, 2010

    Fantasy, that’s what I will call it.

  • giftarist on Mar 16, 2010

    Very nice post. Sensual!

  • AvantPointGuard on Mar 16, 2010

    good combination of photo & poem–well written

  • Shirley Shuler on Mar 16, 2010

    Wow, Johnny, you really know how to start a fire.

  • sambhafusia on Mar 17, 2010

    Great share..keep work on dear..

  • carole (bishy57) on Mar 17, 2010

    sensual & witty, nice!

  • Cat on Mar 17, 2010

    Once again, you have made me smile but…
    “polyurethane foam”?

  • Moira62 on Mar 17, 2010

    Lovely poem Johnny …well done :)

  • papaleng on Mar 18, 2010

    Your in a very passionate mood, pal.. good choice of words too..

  • Roberta on Mar 19, 2010

    Wow Johnny, this is a hot one
    I would like to do all of these things except having my bath in Milk and polyurethane, I think you might like Milk and Honey instead, or does the polyurethane make everything hotter… phew….

  • Geomorphosis on Mar 21, 2010

    Very sensual… For sure I couldn’t write something ‘hot’ like this one.

  • jamesII on Apr 4, 2010

    I mean–why shall I sit on your knee and whisper any plans to you–when you have already had them made! Tell you what–
    we will just look dull at each other until we grow old. For fun–
    pop corns with false teeth–and for pure enchantment–our own
    two hours show on Jerry Springer–citing some of the most foul and un-natural events ever known to human–then kiss! Cool!

  • ken bultman on Apr 15, 2010

    Bathe me in milk?

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