I found myself going to a nogalstic period in my life where everything I wanted was mine.Feeling a bit on the romantic side, this piece came to mind so I jotted it down.Someone may relate to it and go back to a moment that they counted special as well.

You asked me what I wanted for my sixth anniversary,

has it really been that long since we exchanged vows?

But in both our hearts it seems like it was  yesterday,

but our curly haired daughter is going on six years old.

****

I ponder your question with serious dark blue eyes,

what do I want this year from my handsome husband?

I require no furs, a mansion or even a brand new car,

the gold and diamond wedding band I have is enough.

****

Write me a love letter I tell my patiently waiting love,

this is all I want for my anniversary from you this year.

Take me back again to the October day that I  met you,

write me a letter to make me fall in love with you again.

****

In it you can tell me how beautiful I was to you then,

but in your dark brown eyes that fact hasn’t changed.

Tell me now that I still can take your breath away,

that an erotic desire is still  there when you see me.

****

Write to me about the very first time we made love,

ecstasy and passion was with us in the hotel room.

That night we fell asleep in one anothers warm arms,

you never wanted to let me go from that point on.

****

Write to me about our wedding on that August day,

the gold and diamond ring made me your wife forever.

Tell me again about our honeymoon night we had,

let your mind go back to the birth of our daughter.

****

Write me a love letter about all of this plus some,

use your creative talent as a writer to say all this.

Let the words flow like a smooth flowing river,

what you are feeling in your heart guides your pen.

****

But most of all write that you still love very much,

that we will be a king and queen in our own kingdom.

I promise to write a love letter back to my beloved,

all I ask out of you this year is write me a love letter.

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  • King Coil on Jan 14, 2011

    A lovely piece that describes eloquently what it is you want.

  • papaleng on Jan 14, 2011

    Dear Roxanne,

    you may not have heard it
    But the way you express your thought
    Got my heart on a faster beat
    You truly one to be sought

    You r heart, I will be desire
    Though, I don\’t know how
    To start, for I am naive
    At a loss for words.

    This one is is well-written poem,friend.

  • Lord Banks on Jan 14, 2011

    A very nice and sweet poem my friend. I cant write poetry so I cant oblige with a little didty for you. Good work. LB

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 14, 2011

    you know, when you think about it, that\’s what every wife would treasure most.

  • CA Johnson on Jan 16, 2011

    This is a very beautiful love letter. Thank you so much for sharing.

  • Saxenadhi on Jan 20, 2011

    A great write

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