My thoughts when I can’t sleep.

I am just sat hear.
My children,
are in bed.
My thoughts,
are my own,
as they whiz,
round my head.
I know I should,
be in bed,
but my other half,
has taken it over instead.
His loud snoring is enough,
to wake the dead.
What chance have I got of,
getting some shut eye.
Taking my pen in hand,
I venture off to writers land.
What ever I come up with,
I will let you know.
Anything can happen in,
writers land.
Some times it’s planned,
some times it just,
comes too hand.
It might turn out to be,
a grand piece of,
literacy.
Maybe I could sent it,
for someone to view,
but then again it’s just,
my thoughts whizzing,
round my head.
Now I am ready for,
my bed.

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Comments (9)
  • George W Whitehead on Jan 31, 2009

    I know what you mean cardy. Well done.

  • Darla Smith on Jan 31, 2009

    Great poem! I like it a lot!

  • hazvie on Jan 31, 2009

    yeah m always there too…….[writers land], thanx

  • Nadir on Jan 31, 2009

    Well done…… I liked it very much.

    Our flights have no limits.

  • Sunshine Raines on Jan 31, 2009

    I think we all enjoyed this becouse we have all been there I like the way you wrote it made me feel as though I was in your head and serching for that writers land :>)

  • tn4nyx on Jan 31, 2009

    good one.

  • S Air on Jan 31, 2009

    Good poem…a place i visit now and again too!

  • Brave Photographer on Feb 1, 2009

    Nice poem. Keep on penning!

  • Suppee XX on Feb 21, 2009

    Captured nicely.

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