When one peels away the darkness, what but darkness can remain?

 

Writer’s Challenge #19- Kindred Zombie, Marshmallow

 

                                    By David Crerand

 

Marshmallow maggots lie scattered cross the dance floor

Where twisted bodies, broken in their own frenzy

Collapse upon each other with vacant, panhandler eyes,

While a band of Hell’s own screaming outcasts

Pound on instruments both so deadly and melodic.

 

Twisting remnants of a once glorious assembly,

Strain like bloated carcasses beneath a gaseous moon,

And the lonely keening wail of some war-addled bastard

Scrabbles up out of the cold, broken, rotting peat

Ensnaring the weak, the pitiful and guile-less.

 

Dare me now, to reach my hand among you,

Dare me now, to unleash my kindred zombie,

Dare me now, to taste evils ne’er forgiven

Dare me now, to take what I will have.

 

Shattered barricades that once promised sweet protection

For battered hopes who’s long-torn robe of innocence,

Fell bloodied, savaged, near forgotten, beneath a cloven hoof

Anguished echoes of the fallen linger at the edge of hearing

Staving off the maniacal silence of the damned.

 

The stained glass lies broken on the courtyard steps,

Dreams of countless generations fall on fallow fields

While stripped of everything that joyous peace might yield

Only the blinded eyes of the sightless can readily envision

The last of all last threads unraveling.

 

To reach my hand among you, Dare Me Now,

To unleash my kindred zombie, Dare Me Now,

To taste evils ne’er forgiven, Dare Me now,

To take what I will have, Dare Me, Dare Me Now.

 

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  • Butterfly Musings on Feb 22, 2010

    WOW, I read in awe and wonderment!!! fantastic

  • BradONeill on Feb 22, 2010

    so is this a rock concert in hell or what? Rock on brother.

  • S A JOHNSON on Feb 23, 2010

    Marshmallow maggots. Love it. Great work.

  • XXElleXX on Feb 23, 2010

    Sublime David…this piece can be interpreted in so many different ways :-) Love the living dead imagery in this…entertaining stuff bud :-)

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 23, 2010

    Wow! This is an excellent poem for the challenge!

  • I Have Had Enough on Feb 28, 2010

    You do my words justice; but then, I knew you would.

  • spiritwalker on Feb 28, 2010

    Oh I am in ecstacy! i love the decorative words that describe the damned

  • spiritwalker on Feb 28, 2010

    I love the decorative words of the damned…hehe

  • Valerie Keller on Feb 28, 2010

    Wow! Its like Prom in Hell! Good post for the challenge.

  • Duff D Moss on Mar 1, 2010

    Wow – that is different for you – and brilliant. I’m in awe – kind of like when I read something of Fegger’s :-) Great stuff dude. Thanks for playing

  • Rod Ferrandino on Mar 3, 2010

    dark, haunting, and very cinematic.

  • oldster on Mar 4, 2010

    Not your normal straightforward read David. It has that slow witted zombie like chant and decription, but the chorus suggests a far greater menace and presence.
    Well up to your usual high standard.

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