I wrote this back when I was a teen. Over a girl I met one summer.

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Writing a Poem

I want to write

I want to say

The words that never

Come to mind

It’s all a blank

Ans all is dull

When looking at the

Empty Page

.

I seem to bite

Another way

The things that ever

Miss my kind

I have to yank

And give a pull

When getting word the

Plenty wage

.

I see the love

Of the people

And try to say the

Thing they do

But I never

Can in saying

Put the word I want

To relate

.

Flying above

The old Steeple

I want to make the

Best of you

All together

I am playing

With the empty want

Of my plate

.

I want to write

I want to say

The things that I can

See in you

I have no sight

To all the way

For the things we can

See and do

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Comments (9)
  • raman13 on Oct 5, 2009

    GOOD

    VERY GOOD

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 5, 2009

    Well you have been able to write what you thought you couldn’t. I really like this.

    Christine

  • PR Mace on Oct 5, 2009

    You have quite a talent.

  • martie on Oct 5, 2009

    very nice. A good poem expressing a lot of feeling.

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 5, 2009

    Very nice poem.

  • giftarist on Oct 5, 2009

    great piece!

  • Jane Jane on Oct 5, 2009

    pretty nice poem.

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 3, 2009

    a well written piece with great delivery,

  • Palestrya on May 19, 2011

    Okay, good. . .

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