Diving with sea lions can be dangerous. In memory of a great author and lover of the sea. John Anderson. Rip brother.

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We sailed off into the sea,

A group of friends and me.

What it was we were looking for,

could be found on a nearby shore.

There were the sea lions out at play,

We donned our gear and into the bay.

The sea lions were a magnificent site,

graceful creatures swam with delight.

Through the bubbles in the dark blue,

I pointed out a shadow coming close to you.

At first I thought a sea lion was near,

 then I realized it was a creature to be feared.

The shark he bumped you and you began to flail,

Your efforts at escape were doomed to fail.

The four of us not a thing we could do,

When that toothy fish took a hold of you.

Your blood spilled into the blue,

Mixing and creating a darkened hugh.

The shark he took just one bite,

Half of you floated by on my left ,

The other half on my right.

The others they all swam for the boat,

I held your hand as your life poured out.

This shark he came back again,

Propelled through the water by tail fin.

Life no longer lit your eyes,

from my hands the shark did pry.

The shark swam off with you between his teeth

A charming author became a story, in a horror beneath.

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  • Littlekid137 on Jul 27, 2009

    Wow this was very good. I’m sorry to heAR ABOUT your lost my friend.

  • katie marie on Jul 27, 2009

    Those challenge words made a pretty fast connection for you I see. Excellent tribute to your friend.

  • David Crerand on Jul 27, 2009

    see comment at PM

  • BradONeill on Jul 28, 2009

    David, No I spoke to his wife about it and she was ok with it. I know I was a bit worried about it myself.

  • I Have Had Enough on Jul 28, 2009

    Did that really happen? Fitting tribute to a friend.

  • David Crerand on Jul 28, 2009

    That was very thoughtful of you to consider Alicia’s feelings, and the kids. You’re a good man, Brad.

  • Duff D Moss on Jul 29, 2009

    Far out – what a horrific thing to have witnessed.

  • Brenda Nelson on Aug 2, 2009

    I was reading along thinking how touching, then the body going in half, well that was just….well it left me for words…okay if you are a lover of the sea, I suppose its one of the better ways of dying, rather that than being hit by a car I suppose. Really an interesting read I must say.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Aug 2, 2009

    My parents never allowed me to learn how to swim. I watch my sealife from the seashore, or I would if I lived near the ocean. Interesting poem, a tad unusual, which I like
    by the way HUE is spelt hue, not hugh. Normally I cant spell, but as an artist its one word I do know.

  • oldster on Aug 5, 2009

    Hard to lose and friend and be unable to do anything about it.

  • wonder on Sep 5, 2009

    I liked it very much.

  • Rod Ferrandino on Dec 3, 2009

    Don’t know how I missed this article, but it showed up as a suggested reading link on one of my pieces; moving tribute, and I am sorry for everyone’s loss.

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