I like the way you wrote, after reading, I feel like writing one, haha.

LOL!!! Starpisces, maybe we are twin in the poem-writing world! Thanks for your comment, I really appreciate it.

cool piece

great work

Dancing on the clouds, I am.
Writing with the ink of life.

that\’s Classic .

Very lovely poem…joyful,dreamy…Love it!

Lovely poem. Beautifully written. Count me in the daydreaming that I often do.

I like the way you write your poems. Great job for this one.

Excellent poem and something I can relate to!

Beautiful poem. Dreamers we are.

sweet

This is the first item of your works that I have read and it is so true to life. You expressed your feelings magnificently.

nice poem,thanks

It’s the writer’s world for sure.

Me too, hon.

This is an excellent lyric. It reveals powerful emotions of the poet.

You can turn off this to a beautiful song. You tell your true emotions and feelings. Love reading the whole poem. Good work!

LOL!! All your comments are very entertaining, motivating, and undoubtedly unique! Thanks so much for all the appreciations, I’m quite surprised that many of you, my friends, still able to enjoy my simple poem even though it’s still lack of vocabularies (I think). Thank you, thank you so much for all the supports!

You have expressed your feelings so well in this piece. Lovely work.

liked this one cheers

@Christine: Thank you! Yes, you got me right, I’m learning to express my feelings and I’m glad that you could catch my feelings here.

@yes me: Thanks! Cheers!

Well composed writing.

Thank you! You have very well composed writings too!

Wow, very nice piece. You are born “poet”….Keep up the good work….:)

You are a great poet Tang!

@oncewantobeawriter: Hey! Thanks! I’m not sure whether I’m a born “poet” (since actually none of my family goes well in language, most of them only get 6 out of 10 at school and no body here loves poem or other literature works like I do). LOL But of course, I’m glad if you think that way. That’s a huge praise for me. I hope I could stick to the ground now.

Wew, those smileys up there seem so good in linear path, LOL. I’m not doing that with purpose, by the way.

@Vajpeyi: Thank you! I’m glad to hear that! Have a great day to you, my friend.

Beautiful poem my friend

I can relate with this one. Its really nice to be free for awhile.

Beautiful poem my friend

good post

Beautiful poem. I too wish I could be free of stress such as deadlines and relax.

If only we could all break free every once in a while . . . was the poem your escape or did it fulfill one of your deadlines?

“Dancing on the clouds, I am.
Writing with the ink of life.”

So nice that i fell in love with these two lines

Nice, rhythmic poem!