A young boy’s true emotion for a girl who seems not trusting him.

Written on a Papyrus
 

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Through the wind I breath slowly,
With eyes close, and lips sealed
 I bow down to your voice
Like my tears that’s flowing softly.
 
There are things on my mind that I can’t tell,
Every time I think of it,
It always have to break my heart
Now It is all written all to you.

Every single detail has been detailed
I tried to take it away
By giving my heart  and time to you
But it always giving you a hard time, always..

I knew it…
And even though I always wrote your name on every papyrus I have.

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  • Betty Carew on May 28, 2009

    Wow what a wonderful poem from the past Papaleng.

  • Ramalingam on May 28, 2009

    Nice poem.

  • nutuba on May 28, 2009

    Romantic and heart felt — great expression of love!

  • Jo Oliver on May 28, 2009

    Beautiful

  • Joe Dorish on May 28, 2009

    Wow, that is interesting.

  • PR Mace on May 28, 2009

    A true joy to read.

  • goodselfme on May 28, 2009

    Wonderful and deep feelings penned.

  • Lady Sunshine on May 28, 2009

    How touching papaleng!

  • kate smedley on May 28, 2009

    Very moving, a lovely read.

  • Mr Ghaz on May 28, 2009

    Excellent post!!..this is a wonderful and lovely poem..well written piece as usual..I really liked it..Well done and thanks a lot foe sharing this nice work.

  • UNofre Pili on May 28, 2009

    This is great. It really touches the heart.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on May 28, 2009

    Wonderfully expressed article.

  • Eunice Tan on May 28, 2009

    It is very romantic and excellent

  • Jamie Myles on May 28, 2009

    This is wonderful Papaleng.

  • Poetic Enigma on May 28, 2009

    What a wonderfully heartfelt piece,
    Amazingly written, Thanks for sharing

  • DA Cournean on May 28, 2009

    Very moving…

  • Joie Schmidt on May 28, 2009

    So beautiful……….*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • monica55 on May 29, 2009

    Very sweet.
    Monica.

  • swatilohani on May 29, 2009

    well crafted

  • nobert soloria bermosa on May 29, 2009

    lovely and entertaining,i wish i still have time to write poem,

  • rizzei on May 29, 2009

    very touching:) i really felt the emotion wrapped in the poem

  • Likha on May 30, 2009

    The papyrus made a big difference to the drama of the poem. Nice one.

  • Ruby Hawk on May 30, 2009

    The papyrus sealed the deal.

  • nenen on May 31, 2009

    a very romantic poem from you

  • FB on May 31, 2009

    Excellent!

  • Virginia Wolfe on Jun 1, 2009

    such a sweet poem!

  • Glynis Smy on Jun 1, 2009

    Nice work Papaleng.

  • Debra. on Jun 1, 2009

    Well done, Papaleng!

  • Joshua Miguel on Jun 2, 2009

    nice poem papi.

  • Mystical Whitewolf on Jun 2, 2009

    Beautiful poem my friend.

  • Wylrhyss Terrado RN on Jun 2, 2009

    Simple yet beautifiul

  • MMV Abad on Jun 4, 2009

    Very nice!

  • heidiefernandez on Jul 25, 2010

    ang ganda papaleng…. I really loved it…

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