Wrong Thing

ceegirl on Oct 27, 2009

Tags: hung up, stay strong, wrong thing

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If it’s wrong don’t do it.

If you know what you about to do is wrong don’t do it

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Because you will get hung up

The hung up will be very strong

Because you knew you was in the wrong

Do the right thing and you want get hung up

Image by Ken Lund via Flic

Stay very strong and you want have to worry about doing wrong.

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Comments (41)

Christine Ramsay on Oct 27, 2009
You are so right. Well said.

Christine
Snooky on Oct 27, 2009
You are correct. Gods will is internal when we go against it,
we punish our self endlessly.
ken bultman on Oct 27, 2009
Good write.
chitragopi on Oct 27, 2009
Good words.
Mean lean gangster on Oct 27, 2009
Nice poem and pictures
Darla Cooke on Oct 27, 2009
So very true!
Hugo La Rosa on Oct 27, 2009
Nice article. It makes a lot of sense to me!

Sincerely,

Hugo
alc on Oct 27, 2009
Nice read!
Petalm on Oct 27, 2009
Very good poem. Check your spelling (want/won’t)
Chris Stonecipher on Oct 27, 2009
Nicely written my friend. It is human nature to try an do mischievious deads. A sign of maturity is when a person learns right from wrong and chooses to do the right thing. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.
Blessings to you,
Chris
lindalulu on Oct 27, 2009
Very nice…
Sourav on Oct 27, 2009
Nice write
cebuanaeyez on Oct 27, 2009
The power of guilt! Great write!
Frances Lawrence on Oct 27, 2009
Very good advice.
Tanya Wallace on Oct 27, 2009
Lovely write Cee with a great message!!
Ruby Hawk on Oct 27, 2009
It’s true,
Guy Hogan on Oct 27, 2009
If life was only that simple. Unfortunately everything is not black or white. But I know what you mean.
Shirley Shuler on Oct 27, 2009
So true!
wonder on Oct 28, 2009
A good message.
James DeVere on Oct 28, 2009
How can you sometimes tell right from wrong? j
giftarist on Oct 28, 2009
Well said,
iimhere2 on Oct 28, 2009
Agree with prewious poster
LOVELYHONEY on Oct 28, 2009
marvellous imagination

and thanks i do no wrong

god willing
Joanna Maharis on Oct 28, 2009
This is a very nice piece. I like the photos together with the captions.
lillyrose on Oct 28, 2009
to true! great way of putting it x
Rouge Weasel on Oct 28, 2009
So True…
CA Johnson on Oct 28, 2009
You’re so right! That is a way to avoid trouble.
Will Dee on Oct 29, 2009
Nice write. What we need to do is invent a time machine so we can come back and fix future mistakes:-)
goindia on Oct 29, 2009
Good. Keep the great work on.
papaleng on Oct 29, 2009
good write and great advice.
Lord Banks on Oct 29, 2009
Nice one nice pics too.
Patrick Regoniel on Oct 29, 2009
That’s nice.
martie on Oct 29, 2009
great poem
bobbyt on Oct 30, 2009
It’s go to obey.
Aiyanna on Nov 2, 2009
Well said and how true!!!
Richard Allen Kent on Nov 2, 2009
Great Job ! God bless you
writecorner on Nov 2, 2009
Good rythm to the piece, strong sense of voice, too. Well done!
deklin42 on Nov 3, 2009
I’m going to stay strong.
Johanny Lisbeth on Nov 3, 2009
Nice, you\’re raising awareness.
Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 4, 2009
nice!
CutestPrincess on Nov 17, 2009
very well said… well written piece!

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