Yes I remember the dance when we first met in Honululu.


Yes I remember

 

I remember the night

We last met on the dance floor

As we tapped away you clapped

And smiled looking

Then you called so to say

Before I could even ask 

If it was for me

You walked upto the dance floor

To joined the sea.

 

We tapped and clapped

The picnic type dance

Some years ago

I saw on a silver screen. 

 

Twas a lovely tap dance

One had ever seen

Yes she was Kim Novak of her times

 

To night it was just you and me

Through the night we danced

Merrily we pranced

Across the floor

With smiles and kisses

Twas a joyous dance with thee

 

 

 

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  • Val Mills on Jan 8, 2010

    I can imagine you out there on the dance floor.

  • Sue Nuckles on Jan 9, 2010

    Lively poem!

  • wonder on Jan 9, 2010

    A good warming up session.

  • drelayaraja on Jan 9, 2010

    Nice one LH :)

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Jan 9, 2010

    nice expressions…dance dance dance :D

  • Frances Lawrence on Jan 9, 2010

    Very nice poem. Should I know who Kim Novak is?

  • albert1jemi on Jan 9, 2010

    great poem

  • LovelyWolf on Jan 10, 2010

    A romantic poem centered around dance, beautiful! Thanks for the share!

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