Yesterday’s Rain

Liane Schmidt on May 26, 2008

Tags: ache, arms, door, heart, longing, lost, love, memory, messages, poem, poet, Poetry, Rain, remember, yesterday

Lost forever.

I check my heart
At your door
I check my messages
And sometimes, press send
I forget the feel of your touch
Was it chamomile?
I close my eyes because
It’s lost to me
Washed away completely
In yesterday’s rain.

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nobert soloria bermosa on May 26, 2008
so sad but beautiful piece of poetry,
tracy sardelli on May 26, 2008
beautiful and sad, well done.
salvatore on May 26, 2008
beautiful poem but also sad, nice one Liane.
quiet voice on May 26, 2008
…Hi, Liane, one can feel the
sense of longing. Well written.
Take care.
quiet voice on May 26, 2008
…Hi, Liane, one can feel the
sense of longing. Well written.
Take care.
CHAN LEE PENG on May 26, 2008
Thanks and take care!
Devin Aldine on May 26, 2008
This is beautiful. I can feel the longing and the wishing to reach out and grasp hold of what is sadly forgotten. Very good job.
viniyo on May 26, 2008
Hi,

It really touched my heart. A lovely poem.
Ruby Hawk on May 26, 2008
Thanks for sharing.
Darlene McFarlane on May 26, 2008
Sad yet beautiful. Even the title is beautiful.

As usual, you have touched my heart.

Thank you,Laine.

Darlene
soconnor on May 26, 2008
beautiful
Dee Huff on May 26, 2008
Gorgeous poem.
Susan on May 26, 2008
Very nice poem Liane. The image is perfect as well.
MindIt on May 26, 2008
Beautifully expressed..though it makes one pensive
acecampillo on May 27, 2008
Nice poem, Good job.
God Bless!
Tony on May 29, 2008
Beautifully written!!!
Gail Nobles on May 30, 2008
Great job on your poem!
Nick Kenney on May 30, 2008
How sad…
Lucy Lockett on May 31, 2008
Rather profound, I thought, very beautifully penned. You are going from strength to strength.
Love & light to you
Judy Sheldon on Jun 2, 2008
Sadness and rain go hand in hand in your poem..painfully exquisite..wistfully longing..
Eric L Faulkner Eleaf Noel on Jun 3, 2008
Beautifull poem Liane. Also thank you for your comment.
Love and peace my sister.
Andri on Jun 7, 2008
alot of rain these days here!

andri
Donald Barr on Sep 7, 2008
Great, short, sad, not enough adjectives to describe this one.
Ella Currence on Mar 2, 2009
great poem it touch my heart.
Colleen Ranney on Mar 19, 2009
I am left without words. Great poem!

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