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Virginia Wolfe on Nov 26, 2008

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A poem that I wrote about a person I would rather forget.

You tried to pull me down, deep into your sin.
You pricked my finger,
never be whole, never worthy of HIS love.
I thought I told you a long time ago,
I don’t want your kind around.
I was so weak, longing for understanding,
someone who knew what it was like.
You were dark and beautiful,
so beautiful I could not see your knife.
You fucked with me, fucked with my head.
I will not forgive, I have turned my back.
Neat new people, misleading, common interest intriguing,
you must think I forgot.
With out consent you soiled me,
never be whole again, never worthy of HIS love.
I have blocked the darkness, betrayed power held,
no right to promise away.
I’ve taken it back.

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Lauren Axelrod on Nov 26, 2008
Wow, Virginia this is edgy and I can feel the pain in your heart and torment. Well conveyed.
Chris Stonecipher on Nov 26, 2008
I would like to leave an intelligent comment but all I can say is that it is full of powerful emotion, well written and I pray that your heart will be mended.
God Bless you always,
Chris
Ray1984 on Dec 10, 2008
I really liked this poem. Understanding of how you felt in the poem. Very strong. Keep on writing.
Pixie of Pain on Dec 12, 2008
Your best works are the ones so emotionally driven that the reader feels the pain and suffering you endured. That to me is the mark of a great author/poet.
Brian Daniel Stankich on Dec 19, 2008
ouch
Blue Buttefly on Dec 23, 2008
Its heart-piercing. Very well written!
Kim Buck on Jan 5, 2009
May you forgive and forget.
Virginia Wolfe on Feb 12, 2009
thank you all for your comments. sorry it took me so long to return the favor.

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