You and Onlyyou

wonder on Mar 13, 2010

Tags: heart, rubble, rut, trouble

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Sweet talking to you.

You stood by me when I was sad

in pain cried ouy my heart

you consoled me, oh you were there

for me, right from start.

Your concern when I was in the rut

grappling in the rubble

but its you and only you oh dear

the regular cause of all my trouble.

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Comments (15)

standingproud on Mar 14, 2010
damned if you do
damned if you don’t
Stan Wilson on Mar 14, 2010
Like standingproud says either way you can win.they bring consolation and condemnation…a very sad situation but it happens and this is a very good write up here thanks for the share…
Stan Wilson on Mar 14, 2010
meant to say can’t win,not can win ……..
Frances Lawrence on Mar 14, 2010
Nicely written, I wonder who ‘you’ is?
ken bultman on Mar 14, 2010
What a great turn around. For someone with English as a second language, you have a wonderful way wit words.
shivaleen on Mar 14, 2010
intresting , well done
diyakapoor on Mar 15, 2010
good poem
Starpisces on Mar 15, 2010
wonderful, wonder.
the contradicting “you”, this person is someone very close.
Ruby Hawk on Mar 15, 2010
So true, your best beloved always gives you the most trouble.
Trakiya on Mar 16, 2010
Nice poem.Thanks for sharing this.
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T. S. GARP on Mar 17, 2010
Love can have a bitter taste, but with a little sugar, it’s alright…
Wordcrafter on Mar 18, 2010
The ups and downs of life- life is like this unfortunately. New to the site and I just dropped in to say I like this poem. Keep on.
lillyrose on Mar 30, 2010
beautiful poem. Often it is the ones we love most that cause us most grief
Jenna Christiansen on Apr 4, 2010
oh so good…with a blunt end…I know that feeling…. good write… All the best…
gaby7 on Aug 17, 2010
That was a true friend indeed!

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