Break any part of your body folks but keep the heart intact.

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A Broken heart is like a thousand bones crushed

A broken heart brings darkness at noon

A broken heart blurs missions and visions

A broken heart is the beginning of hopelessness

A broken heart strikes like a spell from those who take gratitude in your demise

A broken heart affects the head, the hands and the soul

But you are better off with a broken head and hands than a broken heart

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  • pattiann on Dec 10, 2011

    Good descriptions of what a broken heart is like.

  • Rosettaartist1 on Dec 10, 2011

    well expressed. sad

  • FX777222999 on Dec 10, 2011

    Not at all, broken heart still can be fixed, while broken head..brain damage.

  • Yvhes P. on Dec 11, 2011

    Very good post. Interesting indeed =)

  • kalule Arthur on Jan 11, 2012

    The precious porcelain of human clay by Lord Byron.
    No wonder clay breaks.
    i wonder what would happen if our hearts were made of diamond, would they melt or rather break?
    Which is which?
    it’s sad that our hearts have to break at one point in time.

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