Love shines brightest.

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And, I close my eyes
To remember the feel
Of your lakes
The feel
Of your stars
They shine brighter
Tonight

I close my eyes
To the pain in the world
Disappear in-to my
Imagination
And, suddenly

The sky is light, blue
And free

I close my eyes
And I see
More

I close my eyes
And, I can feel
More

My angel

Never leave, my side
Never touch another life
As you
Touch mine

Never, my truest heart

Never

For, you are my dreams

My only love

And, my heaven sent everything.

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  • Francie on Jan 25, 2008

    Your poem is just lovely.

  • Dee Huff on Jan 25, 2008

    This poem is utterly beautiful.

  • IcyCucky on Jan 25, 2008

    Just very, very beautiful..

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jan 25, 2008

    Good poem!Thanks for sharing this, Liane! Take care!

  • Judy Sheldon-Walker on Jan 25, 2008

    Such a lovely poem. Thank you.

  • Cherrycher on Jan 25, 2008

    Liane,
    I like this very much.
    Good job!!
    -cc

  • Ed Moore on Jan 25, 2008

    Liane…

    This one surpassed the last one, which was brillant! I am running our of verbs! Good, good, writing here. I like what is not said just as much as what is said. True artistry! This one seduced me. I am now a hopeless fan!

  • bhahmz on Jan 25, 2008

    lovely and meaningful poem..truly warms my heart n puts me into dreamland..write more!! n by any means..keep up the great work! :)

  • Lucy Lockett on Jan 25, 2008

    Much passion and joy in this poem, nice writing.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 25, 2008

    A sweet poem from a young girl’s hert.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Jan 25, 2008

    So beautiful and somehow,so familiar. I love how you put your whole heart into everything you write. It gives your work a special feel all of it’s own.

    Thank for sharing with us, Laine.

  • Joe Poniatowski on Jan 25, 2008

    Stunning and heart-wrenching. Beautiful prose.

  • miriam ramirez on Jan 25, 2008

    Wonderful!

  • Anne Lyken-Garner on Jan 26, 2008

    Sweet!

  • chikoos on Feb 9, 2008

    Beautiful.

  • Mrs. Heart on Oct 5, 2009

    Sooooo beautiful!

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