A poem of two people in love, nobody in mind.

You are my true number one

I miss you when you are not here

I will ring you later on

I love your company when you are near.

 

 

I will never let you go

I feel like I have known you for years

All I want is to make you happy, this I do know

I hate to see you cry with those tears.

 

 

So many people are left behind

Too many nice people going without love

Their loss is my gain as you my love are my little dove

What is wrong with them are they all blind?

 

 

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Comments (15)
  • fordtristan on Nov 9, 2009

    beautiful.

  • Atanacio on Nov 9, 2009

    a very good write well done

  • cebuanaeyez on Nov 9, 2009

    Not blind…just have not found number one. Good read =)

  • fragile18 on Nov 9, 2009

    good poem :)

  • wonder on Nov 10, 2009

    Beautifully composed.

  • giftarist on Nov 10, 2009

    Nice write!

  • diamondpoet on Nov 10, 2009

    That was really sweet, nice wite.

  • chitragopi on Nov 10, 2009

    Good poem. Liked it

  • Ramalingam on Nov 10, 2009

    A very nice poem. Thanks

  • mathurans on Nov 10, 2009

    Good One

  • yam1231 on Nov 11, 2009

    nice 1 =]

  • loveableseth on Nov 12, 2009

    Good job Sandie, i wish I had a love like that

  • inuni on Nov 12, 2009

    good job.

  • lillyrose on Nov 15, 2009

    really beautiful!

  • Jane Jane on Nov 15, 2009

    nice poem. lovely.

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