To my wife, Lisa.

When did the world begin?

When did the sun first shine?

I think I know when it might have been,

When your eyes first met mine.

When did my heart first beat?

When did I start to see?

The first time our lips did meet,

Your kiss gave true love to me.

Now time has passed and we are one.

Joined as man and wife.

When people ask, how long we’ve been together

I tell them for all of my life.

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  • clay hurtubise on Jul 2, 2010

    Now that is sweet!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Joie Schmidt on Jul 2, 2010

    So beautiful*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • Mr Ghaz on Jul 3, 2010

    Nice one. well written poem i-like it :)

  • Butterfly Musings on Jul 3, 2010

    A beautiful poem!!

  • John McDonnell on Jul 3, 2010

    Very sweet, lovely sentiments expressed in this poem. You have a way with this kind of poetry.

  • Milton H Peebles III on Jul 3, 2010

    Liked this muches
    Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • revivor on Jul 5, 2010

    simple but sweet

  • Paul Roberts on Jul 5, 2010

    Your happiness show through on this one. Well done. Smile

  • Likha on Jul 8, 2010

    Seriously, how long have you guys been together? You sound like you just tied the knot. Sweet couple!

  • Christine Ramsay on Jul 10, 2010

    That is so beautiful. I wish you luck in your life together.

    Christine

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