A poem about a friend bringing forth ideas.

My mind is like a solemn tomb

Which is dry, no thought, or tear

It’s sort of like an empty room

With no excitement close or near

But you create a voice in me

That transforms the silent void

You are blue color in my sea

Now how could I be annoyed?

You are the color to my painting

You are the cause of every rhyme

You’re my sunshine when it’s raining

Even so, I love you all the time

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  • Darlene20 on Apr 14, 2011

    What a lovely poem, Great work.

  • Oversoul on Apr 14, 2011

    The Oversoul, grandmaster-poet loves this beautifully written poem. I second the statement of your first comment: Great work!

  • Lynn Hollis on Apr 14, 2011

    Great poem. It leaves me with a feeling of contentment and happiness.

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