Looking from a woman’s perspective, being called fat by a boyfriend must make her feel really hurt. When I wrote this Poem, I tried to reflect how a woman would feel after the guy she thought she loved called her fat and what she may have said to him after he said that to her.

“You Called Me Fat”

 

You promised you’d never call me fat,

And yet here we are,

That word thrown in my face,

Damn woman, you are fat,

 

I’m trying to hide the pain,

 I feel from inside,

Those hurting words,

Said without care,

How dare you say that to me,

Screw you,

You just proved you don’t really care,

 

If you loved me like you say you do,

What could I have possibly said to you,

To make you say such a thing,

Guess you don’t really love me,

You called me fat,

Why would you do that,

 

Do you no longer love me,

That you dare say that word,

Fat was what you said,

And yet,

I can’t get it in my head,

That you’d say that to me,

And so babe I say this to you,

Go to hell, because that’s where I am,

Because you chose to call me fat,

And

I’m not taking that.

 

If today you wanted sex,

You wouldn’t be calling me names,

You’d be telling me how much you care,

You wouldn’t be saying I don’t look good in my new under wear,

That now I’ve gained a few pounds,

I now look fat,

Well buddy I’ve got news for you,

The days of having sex with me are done,

As you say, I’m fat and no fun,

So stick it in your hat,

You called me fat,

 

Its time for you to go,

You will never know,

The pain you’ve brought to me,

You called me fat,

There is only one thing to say,

Get out by the end of the day,

It’s the last time you will call me fat,

Get out of my life,

You dirty rat.

 

Copyright Paul Faulkenham January 9, 2011

 

 

 

 

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