A poem of encouragement for a friend who will undergo brain surgery.

You Can Do It!

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Life has again played its luck
In  a wink of an eye, your world crumbles,
Life had changed its hue, from blue to black
Now, you’re a shadow of that clown 

This Big C is tearing your heart apart
Confined to a bed, there’s nothing much you and I can do
My heart cries out, seeing your strength going to waste,
But still, a faint smile flashes on your face.

Life is hard, shrewd and tough,
Only the strong has the chance to reach the top
Be strong, the road ahead is undeniably be rough  
Fight and  never give up

Hope punctuates out laughter
And conquers fear
Treat each day positively … like a witty dreamer
And be ready to face any thing …like a gritty runner.            

I have no idea, what you’re going through
Life at times seems to be unfair
But this I know… God cares for you
He will never put on you more than you can bare.

So just keep the “Faith” … the best thing I know
In this life don’t feel so empty
I’ll pray for you as I always do
In God’s own time … Healing will come to you.

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  • Adelnica Amor R. Izon on Dec 3, 2010

    motivating!

  • addjust on Dec 3, 2010

    yes you can do it.

  • lapasan on Dec 3, 2010

    an encouraging poem

  • Phoenix Montoya on Dec 3, 2010

    Oh yes, God cares… He just shows it the right time. Good poem kuya, very timely and a good reminder. Thank you.

  • nz2rdfox on Dec 3, 2010

    Leave everything under HIS care..and all will be well…:)

    God be with you and you’ll be in our prayers as well. :)

  • webseowriters on Dec 3, 2010

    Thanks 4 sharing

  • Starpisces on Dec 3, 2010

    I wish your friend a successful surgery.
    He can do it!

  • Boxervaibhav on Dec 3, 2010

    excellent .. :)

  • Boxervaibhav on Dec 3, 2010

    excellent poem.

  • Love Nancy on Dec 3, 2010

    Good Post. Thanks.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Dec 3, 2010

    Yes he can!

  • albert1jemi on Dec 3, 2010

    nice share

  • Rhodora Bande on Dec 3, 2010

    With God’s grace, yes, he will do it. Nice poem, papaleng. May he/she read this piece.

  • serowa on Dec 3, 2010

    I pray that your friend will come through his illnes. Great words of inspiration that many can get encouragement from.

  • J Anderson on Dec 3, 2010

    Great Post.

    Thanks for share.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 3, 2010

    I am so sorry for your friend, Papaleng. This is a beautiful tribute and I am sure your friend will love it.

    Christine

  • Anupatil on Dec 3, 2010

    A very nice poem, God will help your friend and he can do it.

  • fagina on Dec 3, 2010

    I am sure he will be alright.

  • John Cornor on Dec 3, 2010

    He can do it….Nice post papaleng.

  • Poetic Enigma on Dec 3, 2010

    An encouraging and inspiring piece.
    Thank you for sharing

  • culprit pontiff on Dec 3, 2010

    hopefully he can make it papaleng..
    be strong before Christmas comes..

  • Brewed Coffee on Dec 3, 2010

    I’ll include your friend in my prayers. Be there for your friend Papaleng…Being surrounded by loving people helps in the healing process…Bless you for being such a good friend.

  • LCM Linda on Dec 3, 2010

    Very encouraging. Hope your friend has a successful surgery and recover the soonest. Great share.

  • Eunice Tan on Dec 3, 2010

    Thanks you. We need this poem

  • bryeunade on Dec 3, 2010

    a beautiful poem for a friend in need bro.. sama ko rin siya sa prayers ko..

  • The Soul Explorer on Dec 4, 2010

    Yes, I can do it!

  • Kuru Tsu on Dec 4, 2010

    nice poem. show this poem to your friend. It will give him/her hope.

  • 8Shei8 on Dec 4, 2010

    A moving and inspiring poem!

  • papaleng on Dec 4, 2010

    My friend had read all your comments, and he was really touched. Thank you all guys for the prayers.

  • cyrenjan on Dec 4, 2010

    Yes, all we need is ask and do our best. I am glad to have read this poem. :-)

  • lovestar2010 on Dec 4, 2010

    great poem

  • AJ Garcia on Dec 4, 2010

    Just believe, and God will do the rest….:)

  • Patricksia on Dec 4, 2010

    Thanks for the sharing…inspiring poem!

  • J M Lennox on Dec 4, 2010

    Your friend is fortunate to have your friendship and encouragement. I hope the surgery goes very well.

  • awesome11 on Dec 4, 2010

    great share! thanks!

  • Goodselfme on Dec 4, 2010

    A great encouraging poem. the I like it button is not working.

  • Tulan on Dec 4, 2010

    A wonderful thought for your friend.

  • bobie on Dec 4, 2010

    our God will listen to our prayers. .

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 4, 2010

    Beautiful thoughts.

  • Kaye TM on Dec 5, 2010

    very inspiring

  • gaby7 on Dec 5, 2010

    A very clever poem here papaleng!

  • Patrick Bernauw on Dec 5, 2010

    A good friend of mine passed away because of a brain tumor, this year… Let’s hope for the best, papaleng!

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  • Likha on Dec 6, 2010

    Do know my prayers are with you and your friend for his healing. God can work wonders for those who believe. A touching one from a dear friend.

  • LadyElena on Dec 6, 2010

    Beautiful, touchng poem. I wish your friend well and hope you put a copy of this near him/her when you visit.

    A true friend indeed…

  • nimbleful on Dec 12, 2010

    aw this is touching.. warm wishes to you and your friend. May lots of healing and health come to you and you friend

  • eddiego65 on Dec 17, 2010

    Inspiring! How’s your friend? Praying for your friend’s speedy recovery.

  • rizzei on Jan 8, 2011

    GOD BLESS US ALL..a very wonderful writing papaleng, as always.. :)

  • revivor on Jan 23, 2011

    how’s it going? I’m a month behind everyone else!!

  • FX777222999 on Jan 26, 2011

    Faith is the motivating factor on our lives. Encouraging poem.

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Feb 21, 2012

    My prayers are with you too. I agree with Fx777, but this is a serious surgery so I’m sure that all his loved ones are concerned. Hope everything goes well and remember that God is in control

  • SittieCates on Feb 21, 2012

    Papaleng, I hope, with all my heart, that your friend survived that operation. May you and your friend always be under God’s loving care and protection. Our prayers are with you.

  • FX777222999 on Feb 21, 2012

    another visit of this amazing article of life.

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