A “dismissed” poem.

Oh Stop It!

I”m sick of you whining and complaining about your troubles

Regardless of other people and their common struggles you leap

To a conclusion leaving your mind full of delusions of hopes and schemes

When you’re nothing but a minx, piper of dreams; you lynx

 

Crafty like the jungle wild, behind that infectious smile

You think I don’t see your ploy? You think your torment of me I enjoy?

Forbid yourself the pleasure, I’m no sunken treasure for you to bury

Beneath your muck and mire and misplaced desire of my end

 

What Friend?

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  • Audrey Howitt on Jun 11, 2011

    Strong write, full of emotional charge. Well done!

  • Adrn0919 on Jun 11, 2011

    Wow, felt the anger in your words. Very nicely written.

  • The Real Poet on Jun 11, 2011

    It’s fictitious; irony is i wasn’t angry when i wrote it just thought it up. Thanks all!

  • Poeta Nascitur Non Fit on Jun 11, 2011

    This poem has teeth!

  • MaryGraceJedaverOpingo on Jul 6, 2011

    excellent.! nice organization of ideas.. i can feel the emotion behind..hehehheh well done my friend

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