You Hold Me Tight

clay hurtubise on Jan 6, 2009

Tags: car, drive, heat, heated, hold, love, seat, snow

Ahh, the love between a boy and his curvaceous friend….

My dear, you hold me so,
We travel miles, and miles,
Through sun, night and snow,
All with huge smiles, huge smiles.

With every turn you let me know,
By keeping me seated, planted firm.
To you my stance I owe,
Never once do I squirm.

Life’s journey sees no end,
So we march on, speeding through.
Not breaking loose, just a bend,
You hold me tight, my Elmer’s glue.

We are made for each other, you and me,
Together we complete the drive through life.
We zoom by rivers, mountains and trees,
We slice through canyons like butter and knife.

Now with the snow against my tush,
You’re cold to me when we now meet.
But buttons you know I like to push,
That’s why I love my heated seat.

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Jasin on Jan 6, 2009
Great job.
Alan on Jan 6, 2009
Well Jasin WOULD like this; as you both write juvenile nonsense. Grow up; both of you
Debra. on Jan 6, 2009
Now, that was worth the read! It was just too cute! What a delightful piece!
clay hurtubise on Jan 6, 2009
Thanks Debra and Jasin. Nice to know we don’t have to be stuffed shirts all the time!
Clay
nobert soloria bermosa on Jan 6, 2009
lovely poem for special someone
jimy1666 on Jan 6, 2009
nice job i like it.
Darren Goad on Jan 6, 2009
Some people just need to lighten up, Alan. If we can have an ode to a Grecian Urn why not a love affair with a car? Good work, Clay
goodselfme on Jan 6, 2009
fun read with a nice little twist. so light hearted!
Brian Rasco Craig on Jan 6, 2009
lovely poem i like it.
Sotiris on Jan 6, 2009
Really nice rhyme!
nutuba on Jan 6, 2009
Hahaha, nicely done. I enjoyed the end (pun intended).
Maria Blazz on Jan 6, 2009
Haha… I bet no one in the poetry history write an ode to a heated seat before!
(ps: what does Ayuh! mean in Maine?)
geri ohara on Jan 7, 2009
Hi Think this is absolutely brilliant! great fun and celebratory poem Certainly put a smile on my face.
A Wallbank on Jan 8, 2009
Just fun to read… especially as it’s raining outside the office window now, just what I needed! hehe!
triondmobile on Jan 8, 2009
lol, I love my heated seats too!
MMV Abad on Jan 9, 2009
Cute… Made me smile. Thanks
BC Doan on Jan 12, 2009
Very light poem and fun to read..
AC Hamilton III on Jan 15, 2009
Hats off to you…a man after my own heart..love it…are you my brother???? lol Dad, what happened?

Have a great day?

AC
AC Hamilton III on Jan 20, 2009
I had to come back, after all, this is a two seater, right?

AC
rutherfranc on Jan 27, 2009
had me fooled there too.. naughty of me..
Joie Schmidt on Feb 7, 2009
Very sweet and romantic.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Kate Smedley on Mar 22, 2009
Great ending to this enjoyable poem, very nicely done.

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