To You.

you were my hope

you were my dream

you were my life

you were all of me

you made me happy

you made me smile

you made me laugh

and all the while..

you were hurting

you were in pain

you’re injured leg,

it wasn’t a sprain

it was forever

the rest of your life

the day you passed

felt like a sharp knife

jabbed through my skull

like a hammer to a nail

at least i am for sure

that you didn’t go to hell

you’re looking down

straight at me from above

well you just wait papa

I’ll come give you a hug

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Comments (8)
  • Madan on Nov 9, 2010

    Nice poem

  • ggoksel23 on Nov 9, 2010

    beautiful but sad.

  • lovelife on Nov 9, 2010

    Nicely done!!

  • merlinjh on Nov 11, 2010

    thanks for sharing.

  • john smither on Nov 11, 2010

    Beautifully written.

  • Robert Brems on Nov 11, 2010

    That was sweet, it’s amazing what our heart feels when someone passes.

    It your heart, the love lives on

    Bright and warm, just like the Sun

    No matter what you do in life, no matter what you see

    There will be no greater love, that you had for he.

  • AgronA on Nov 12, 2010

    that was lovely tugged at the heart

  • chhikara on Nov 12, 2010

    I love your writing . keep it up

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