You Left Me with This

Goodselfme on Nov 17, 2009

Tags: caring, friends, friendship, Poetry

Friendships are special beyond words. Thank you friends for all your thoughts to me. I appreciate you very much.

I want to write something important for you to read

Not about love, the weather or even the garden seed.

Something in me wants to come out of me somehow

With keyboard at my fingertips I compose right now.

The time I spend reading, what you left for me right here

Gives me such pleasure, I want to make that so clear.

These times are like a mini visit with just you and me

Never needing to sit beside you, nor necessary to see.

Just knowing when you visit with me in this way

We share and commune with each other, any given day.

Even after I have left your words on my computer screen

They keep on reminding me of our friendship so serene.

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Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 17, 2009
feelings are very well expressed…good composition.
Kip Spleen on Nov 17, 2009
True, that. Good poem.
Poetic Enigma on Nov 17, 2009
Lovely poem, so well expressed too (:
Thanks for sharing!
deep blue on Nov 17, 2009
Our bond as friends could be clandestine but it is well appreciated. A lovely poem.
papaleng on Nov 17, 2009
What a genuine thoughts you have shared. Thanks..
OnlineAnalyst on Nov 17, 2009
Yes Friends are the only solace we find in difficult times and ofcourse times of joy as well.Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem.
giftarist on Nov 17, 2009
Wow, great thoughts there..Thanks for sharing!
Hansika on Nov 17, 2009
very nice
ken bultman on Nov 17, 2009
It\’s easy to be friends with someone so friendly.
chitragopi on Nov 17, 2009
Good tribute to frienship.
Sourav on Nov 17, 2009
Good poem, well written!
CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 17, 2009
I’m glad to know that you’ve a good feeling here. -)
mommie gee on Nov 17, 2009
this is quite heart-felt… nice!
Darla Cooke on Nov 17, 2009
Beautifully written!
ashan1614 on Nov 17, 2009
Isn’t it funny that we sometimes share more with our online friends that we do with people right here with us?
Nydia Esther on Nov 17, 2009
this is so special and beautiful…
martie on Nov 17, 2009
This is so lovely and so true Roberta. We all share a part of ourselves with one another.
Darlene McFarlane on Nov 17, 2009
Such a lovely sentiment, Roberta. We do become close to the friends we meet online. It’s uplifting to read their words of friendship and encouragement.
PR Mace on Nov 17, 2009
I love my friends here and you may be a new friend but you are a dear one. Such well expressed sentiments.
Ruby Hawk on Nov 17, 2009
goodself, I feel the same way about all my friends on Triond. Each visit is a joy to me.
Julie McMurchie on Nov 17, 2009
Hello my friend. Beautiful words.
Steven West on Nov 18, 2009
Very thoughtful and beautifully written.
Moses Ingram on Nov 18, 2009
Great thoughts.
dabutlerdidit on Nov 19, 2009
Simply Beautiful

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