You Shine

Vivek Ratan on Aug 27, 2011

You shine in heart…

You Shine

Shines my dear gold

Silver also shines

But a different kind of shining

A diamond defines

Above three ores

Together in you shine

Your brilliance my dear

Admires my conscience

When, to you, I imbibe

You produce light

Little-little words in me

Show themselves bright

Smile of sky

To earth delights

Golden sun writes

Moon writes silver

You are so cute

My dear look in the mirror

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Rosettaartist1 on Aug 27, 2011
good work
holdkunal on Aug 27, 2011
Why everyone are posting poems in triond?? Does it pay more??
VoIP on Aug 28, 2011
If I had a million dollars,
and a million years,
I would spend them all on writing,
all the things and the fears,
pour out my emotions,
and sketch away my tears….
I would sail around the world,
find the one word that was right,
never worry about the lonely night.
But until that day comes,
(and I Never dwell on it for long),
I will write just for me,
maybe find someone who sings
that write note, that same song,
not worry about some pennies,
to dwell on it takes so long.
Maybe we’ll sing the same song…

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Nice poem, Vivek. I enjoyed it.

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