I’m helpless to resist.

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You tempt me with your touch,

I’m like soft dough in your arms.

You offer me a special GIft,

I submit freely to your love.

When you hold me very close,

I’m helpless to resist your kiss.

You make my whole body quiver,

you rock my world with passion.

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  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Jul 4, 2009

    The last line says it all. Nice piece, Darla.

  • Hollywood James on Jul 4, 2009

    Darla,

    Beautiful piece…rock on!!!!

  • scout on Jul 4, 2009

    Very nice romantic piece Darla

  • Deep Blue on Jul 4, 2009

    The great temptation ever. Nice lines.

  • ken bultman on Jul 4, 2009

    Just like the lovely blossom of a passion flower.

  • goodselfme on Jul 4, 2009

    You state the feelings well

  • Mystify on Jul 4, 2009

    A romantic well written pome.Great work!

  • SweetpeepsLJ on Jul 5, 2009

    Beautiful, well done Darla

  • Linda Lori on Jul 10, 2009

    Very nice!

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