You Tempt Me

Darla Smith on Jul 4, 2009

Tags: kiss, love, relationship, romance, touch

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I’m helpless to resist.

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You tempt me with your touch,

I’m like soft dough in your arms.

You offer me a special GIft,

I submit freely to your love.

When you hold me very close,

I’m helpless to resist your kiss.

You make my whole body quiver,

you rock my world with passion.

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Comments (9)

Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Jul 4, 2009
The last line says it all. Nice piece, Darla.
Hollywood James on Jul 4, 2009
Darla,

Beautiful piece…rock on!!!!
scout on Jul 4, 2009
Very nice romantic piece Darla
Deep Blue on Jul 4, 2009
The great temptation ever. Nice lines.
ken bultman on Jul 4, 2009
Just like the lovely blossom of a passion flower.
goodselfme on Jul 4, 2009
You state the feelings well
Mystify on Jul 4, 2009
A romantic well written pome.Great work!
SweetpeepsLJ on Jul 5, 2009
Beautiful, well done Darla
Linda Lori on Jul 10, 2009
Very nice!

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